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Collificus Drake
 PostPosted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 7:29 am Reply with quote  
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  Collificus Drake
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Birth Name: Collificus Drake

Class: Lower Middle

Year of Birth: 71 ABY

Species:  Neti

Homeworld: Ryyk  

Gender: Male

Height: 4.5 Meters but shapeshifting

Eye Color: Black

Hair: None

Droids:
None
Personal Ships:
none
Clothing:
Huge robe, but is also covered in foliage




Personality:
-Serious
-Charming

Languages Spoken:
-Basic
-Cerean
-High Galactic
-Huttese
-Mon Calamarian
-Neti
-Neimoidan
-Quarrenese
-Twi'leki
-Zabraki

Miscellaneous:
-Shape-shifting
-Known to be extremely violent
-Charming
-small burns


Equipment:
-Red Lightsaber

-Pistol
-Comlink




Bio:

Nobody wants to be born a Neti, especially a force using Neti.

Collificus lived in a small village all Neti occupied, with no friends, no family. His parents had died earlier in his short life; his mom had died in birth with him, she was from a different tribe, and couldn't contain the poor boy who's strange force features could not accompany her body.

His dad had later been killed by the villagers who thought he a traitor for breeding with the enemy forces and different tribe.

Collificus was outcast, and he seemed not to mind it, for he was of the strongest, gifted, smartest, and had the most charm of any of the other members. He had a personality of his own.

Yet, one day, while wondering the woods that foundered his village, four kids jumped him, becuase of then not known, his midichlorians were acting up and caused serious damage to one of the boys. Anytime one got near something bad would happen. They chased him and threw him in a fire.

He was lucky to escape with only minor burns, and vowed revenge on the ones he loved. Then, his life changed, when someone had came to help him. He called himself sith, and taught the boy things he never knew before.

Later on in his life, the boy destroyed the village, slaughtered every single one of them. He had finally fulfilled his wish, and he went back with the man to a place called the eternal empire.


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  High Mage Serratus
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I have issue with this profile. The adopted Neti home planet Rykk (which they colonised after leaving their home planet of Myrkr) was destroyed during the Great Sith War and only one Neti was off-planet at the time. In official canon, he was killed in 10 ABY on Ossus after being reawakened from hibernation and left only one descendant, who was born just as he died. Now, this didn't happen in our canon so I can only assume that the encounter that lead to his reawakening did not happen and therefore that he is still in hibernation on Ossus in our timeline and has no descendant.

But long story short, Collificus could not possibly be a Neti.

Sources;

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Neti
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Ood_Bnar
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Another survivor.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/T%27ra_Saa
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Then according to the timline she is still in hibernation on Anzat. That just leaves two hibernating Neti and no others.


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Venedictos makes a good point.
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

She was never in hibernation. She took root near Tholme's pyre, but that doesn't mean she can't unroot herself. Or maybe someone found her, if we want to go that route.
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I'm going to allow it.
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Location: Eating a bagel (LIKE A BOSS)

So one possible Neti accounts for the tribes and communities described in Collificus's bio?

Not to mention that all Neti are inherently Force-sensitive so he wouldn't be shunned at all for being Force-sensitive, or cause damage to his mother.

Which also raises the matter that Neti grow from seeds, so his mother simply released the seed that would be Collificus, she didn't really give birth to him at all. Not to mention that Neti are only born once every few centuries.

He also mentions his homeworld as Rykk, despite Rykk being destroyed over 4000 years before his birth and can somehow speak 10 languages despite not having spoken to anyone other than a Neti until he was 16, and Neti only learning Basic and Neti in their youth.

This bio just seems badly-researched in my opinion.
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  Lord Aequitas
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Location: Prancing through the fields like a prancing...prancer.

I said I'd allow him being Neti, I wasn't the one who approved his profile.
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Well he'd need to revise his profile to have a logical explanation for being a Neti, as well as fix the other mistakes, nonetheless.
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Grand Mage Aequitas wrote:
I said I'd allow him being Neti, I wasn't the one who approved his profile.


Sorry. That would have been me.  I was merely looking for the required parts, and figured the background would be edited anyways, once the new user gets acclimated to the site.
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  Collificus Drake
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Supreme Commander Marix wrote:
Grand Mage Aequitas wrote:
I said I'd allow him being Neti, I wasn't the one who approved his profile.


Sorry. That would have been me.  I was merely looking for the required parts, and figured the background would be edited anyways, once the new user gets acclimated to the site.


Which I will. Obviously as you could see I did not have enough time to research the subject thouroughly enough. Also, no disrespect to a superior, but you must always realize there are Neti on other planets, and possible for more Neti to breed and come back.


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I'll train him. I think he has much to offer.
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Approved.
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  Lord Aequitas
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Location: Prancing through the fields like a prancing...prancer.

In the words of a good fried of mine:

Jolly Good.

I'll create a training thread.
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  Collificus Drake
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Excuse me, but I need a new master. I have been informed that my master doesn't have enough time, which I know he doesn't. So if anyone could offer their services, that would be grand.




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