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Discussion: Duty and Service: Seamus O'Riley
 PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:51 pm Reply with quote  
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Background:
I was given the assignment in my English class to create an original character to use  for 10 different, independent stories about his/her life, starting with their birth and randomly jumping around the rest of their life, including their death. My first idea was going to be a SW FanFic about my other character Jarik Sol, but my teacher didn't want it in the Star Wars Universe, so I set out to create my own universe.


When that work, some of you may have seen my Tales of Andranh on TDSL, failed to meet my teachers desires as well as my own, I decided to switch characters and worlds and rewrite the stories that I had already written, this time with Seamus.

Just a note: The different additions/posts may or may not be in chronological order. So please try to read the handy "Dates" I leave throughout the story to help you through. For example, the 2nd Article takes place after the 3rd, but is posted before it. The posts go in the order I wrote them, which is in the order my teacher assigned them, which is random and up to his twisted mind. Twisted Evil

Comments, Constructive Criticism, and Questions are welcomed.

Please enjoy.
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I must say, I'm liking the story, but I honestly thought it was a comedy when I first saw the title.
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 PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:43 pm Reply with quote  
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Thanks.

The title is prone to change, I just didn't like my "Seamus O'Riley (I don't have a title yet)" which was the title before "Duty and Service". I tried to think of something better but that's what came to my mind.
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Any ideas for the next chapter? Its a "whatever you want to write about" assignment, so I'm open to ideas.
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Got the next chapter up. Comments?

http://thedarksithlords.myfreeforum.org/sutra125511.php#125511
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I like it. You spelt Marine wrong in the opening paragraph.
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Great. Should have told me before I passed it in today.  Very Happy



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