The Purges discussion

High Prophet Crozeus

Some time ago, I wrote a fanfic on another site to set out the canon for it. However, it was deleted when the site was deleted and I hadn't saved it all into Word (silly me, I know.)

So, I am intending to re-write it. Some of you have already read what was on the other site (Marix, Aequitas, Odin, Adenn, Gra'tua, Celestial, Praxeum) but what I am posting here is a request for your co-operation.

I want to use your characters in the fanfic. Chances are, your character will die in the fanfic (it is set around Shadow dieing), or they will have to do something in it they wouldn't do over here.

So if you don't want your character used, please say so here.

Will, if you have a problem with it, then just say and I won't re-write it.
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Supreme Commander Alor

I liked where it was going, so by all means go ahead and rewrite it. It was a good fanfic. I wish now that I had saved a copy of it myself.
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Once known as Darth Marix

High Inquisitor Gra'tua · Sith Marauder Joined: 18 Apr 2007 Posts: 1071

Go for it.
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High Prophet Crozeus

You should probably know what happens to your people, Marix forms his own Empire centered around the MAZ, Bastion and Yaga Minor. Gra'tua is seen as a threat and Prognie sends people to kill him, but he escapes and goes into hiding.
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Grand Inquisitor Prognie · Dark Lord of the Sith Joined: 11 May 2007 Posts: 1598

You can use me. Gra'tua the threat aye?! Twisted Evil

I never considered that.
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A blessed rage for order

I'd break the law once every week, just to feel your touch.

High Prophet Crozeus

Thank you. You are a central figure, seeing as you kill Shadow and take power.
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Supreme Commander Alor

Sweet. If you need info for my "empire" i have an actual empire for another site that is centered in the MAZ, Bastion, and Yaga Minor. So feel free to ask me questions if you need help getting that empire set up and stuff like that.

EDIT: I just thought of this. But this fanfic would make a great way for us to change the storyline around if we wanted to.
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Once known as Darth Marix

Lord Aequitas

I wouldn't like me used.

Well, I would as long as I'm present at Shadow's death. I wasn't at it in the original draft.
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High Prophet Crozeus

Thing is, I'm only up to the battle of Bastion. Praxeum is dead, Vexen's SSD is blown up. So I would have to have the whole thing up first, and that's going to take a while. And then some.
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High Mage Serratus

If this is the Purge one, keep using Serratus by all means.
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If you see dreadlocks and a staff coming towards you very rapidly, you're in trouble.

High Prophet Crozeus

Yes it is, and thank you. You know what happens to him.
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High Prophet Crozeus

Ok people, I posted the first chapter, rewritten tonight/this morning, here. Think of it as permenant storage.

Please please please let me know what you think. Any comments/complaints/criticisms would be greatly welcomed, even if all you are suggesting is the addition of a comma.

As I said, if you don't like what your character is doing, just say, and I won't do it.

Oh, and remember that this couldn't be more non-canon to TDSL if it tried.
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Grand Inquisitor Prognie · Dark Lord of the Sith Joined: 11 May 2007 Posts: 1598

if you need help understanding what prognie would do in a situation, let me know. Smile

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A blessed rage for order

I'd break the law once every week, just to feel your touch.

High Mage Serratus

You mispelled Darth Nighthawk's name.
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If you see dreadlocks and a staff coming towards you very rapidly, you're in trouble.

High Prophet Crozeus

Ok.

Oh, Chris I didn't see your post. You were there, I'll add a little thing in there.
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Supreme Commander Alor

He's Chris II, btw I'm Chris I.
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Once known as Darth Marix

Lord Aequitas

"He" did not agree to anything.

I am in no way subserviant to you. You may call me "C", Ollie, or just use Aequitas.
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Supreme Commander Alor

Emperor agreed to it.
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Once known as Darth Marix

Lord Aequitas

While he is Admin OOC, I do not believe he has the power to call me something OOC I do not like.

Well, he has the power, but it's against the rules.
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Supreme Commander Alor

Eh. Oh well. I thought it was a good idea.
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Once known as Darth Marix

Lord Aequitas

Thank you for adding me Ollie. Continue the good work.

I like the way I go lol
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Inquisitor Linex · Sith Priest Joined: 10 May 2007 Posts: 87

You can use my character in the story if you want.

I ahve no problem with that.

Emperor Shadow

I read it, I'm somewhat disappointed. Shadow wouldn't die so easily... or pathetically. Confused

However, since it's non-canon, feel free to continue. I like what I read. Seems like an interesting look into a parallel universe from our own.
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High Inquisitor Gra'tua · Sith Marauder Joined: 18 Apr 2007 Posts: 1071

I am a threat to Lord Prognie? Alright I guess that works haha, I wouldn't see it happening but hey its your fic.
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High Prophet Crozeus

Yeah, I spent ages thinking about how to kill Shadow. What I ended up with is that he was slowly, and unknowingly, being poisoned, so that when he fell ill, his immune system was practically destroyed.

It was like killing God! But he had to die someway.

Gra'tua, Prognie becomes paranoid and thinks that EVERYONE is a threat. Nothing personal.

Oh, and