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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:11 am Reply with quote  
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  High Prophet Crozeus
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Some time ago, I wrote a fanfic on another site to set out the canon for it. However, it was deleted when the site was deleted and I hadn't saved it all into Word (silly me, I know.)

So, I am intending to re-write it. Some of you have already read what was on the other site (Marix, Aequitas, Odin, Adenn, Gra'tua, Celestial, Praxeum) but what I am posting here is a request for your co-operation.

I want to use your characters in the fanfic. Chances are, your character will die in the fanfic (it is set around Shadow dieing), or they will have to do something in it they wouldn't do over here.

So if you don't want your character used, please say so here.

Will, if you have a problem with it, then just say and I won't re-write it.
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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I liked where it was going, so by all means go ahead and rewrite it. It was a good fanfic. I wish now that I had saved a copy of it myself.
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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:27 am Reply with quote  
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  High Inquisitor Gra'tua
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Go for it.
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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:32 am Reply with quote  
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  High Prophet Crozeus
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Location: I am yu, and he is mi.

You should probably know what happens to your people, Marix forms his own Empire centered around the MAZ, Bastion and Yaga Minor. Gra'tua is seen as a threat and Prognie sends people to kill him, but he escapes and goes into hiding.
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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 12:24 pm Reply with quote  
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  Grand Inquisitor Prognie
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You can use me. Gra'tua the threat aye?!  Twisted Evil I never considered that.
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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 12:38 pm Reply with quote  
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  High Prophet Crozeus
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Thank you. You are a central figure, seeing as you kill Shadow and take power.
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

Sweet. If you need info for my "empire" i have an actual empire for another site that is centered in the MAZ, Bastion, and Yaga Minor. So feel free to ask me questions if you need help getting that empire set up and stuff like that.

EDIT: I just thought of this. But this fanfic would make a great way for us to change the storyline around if we wanted to.
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  Lord Aequitas
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I wouldn't like me used.

Well, I would as long as I'm present at Shadow's death. I wasn't at it in the original draft.
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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:30 pm Reply with quote  
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  High Prophet Crozeus
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Thing is, I'm only up to the battle of Bastion. Praxeum is dead, Vexen's SSD is blown up. So I would have to have the whole thing up first, and that's going to take a while. And then some.
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If this is the Purge one, keep using Serratus by all means.
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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:31 pm Reply with quote  
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Yes it is, and thank you. You know what happens to him.
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  High Prophet Crozeus
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Ok people, I posted the first chapter, rewritten tonight/this morning, here. Think of it as permenant storage.

Please please please let me know what you think. Any comments/complaints/criticisms would be greatly welcomed, even if all you are suggesting is the addition of a comma.

As I said, if you don't like what your character is doing, just say, and I won't do it.

Oh, and remember that this couldn't be more non-canon to TDSL if it tried.
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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 7:44 pm Reply with quote  
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if you need help understanding what prognie would do in a situation, let me know. Smile
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You mispelled Darth Nighthawk's name.
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 PostPosted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 5:48 am Reply with quote  
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  High Prophet Crozeus
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Ok.

Oh, Chris I didn't see your post. You were there, I'll add a little thing in there.
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

He's Chris II, btw I'm Chris I.
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  Lord Aequitas
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Location: Prancing through the fields like a prancing...prancer.

"He" did not agree to anything.

I am in no way subserviant to you. You may call me "C", Ollie, or just use Aequitas.
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Emperor agreed to it.
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  Lord Aequitas
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Location: Prancing through the fields like a prancing...prancer.

While he is Admin OOC, I do not believe he has the power to call me something OOC I do not like.

Well, he has the power, but it's against the rules.
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Eh. Oh well. I thought it was a good idea.
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  Lord Aequitas
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Thank you for adding me Ollie. Continue the good work.

I like the way I go lol
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You can use my character in the story if you want.

I ahve no problem with that.


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I read it, I'm somewhat disappointed. Shadow wouldn't die so easily... or pathetically. Confused

However, since it's non-canon, feel free to continue. I like what I read. Seems like an interesting look into a parallel universe from our own.
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  High Inquisitor Gra'tua
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I am a threat to Lord Prognie? Alright I guess that works haha, I wouldn't see it happening but hey its your fic.
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  High Prophet Crozeus
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Yeah, I spent ages thinking about how to kill Shadow. What I ended up with is that he was slowly, and unknowingly, being poisoned, so that when he fell ill, his immune system was practically destroyed.

It was like killing God! But he had to die someway.

Gra'tua, Prognie becomes paranoid and thinks that EVERYONE is a threat. Nothing personal.

Oh, and
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Chris I didn't see your post
meant Chris, I didn't see your post. Not Chris 1. Sorry for the confusion.

Yeah, Aequitas' death was one of my favourite bits too. No offense Smile



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