Do you think, when you are done with it, that I could use it as part of my own FanFic? maybe a chapter or two mentioned?
I think it will be a great story you write!
So do you make me look good?
Darth Barad-Dur
You'll just have to wait and find out. And, yeah, you can use part of the story for your fanfic.
Supreme Commander Alor
Very nice...
I was a bit worried about the part where I sleep, but you made it better by me almost killing Malice...
So need any help? I noticed you have a lot of typing errors and stuff like that...
Emperor Shadow
What year is this set in?
Supreme Commander Alor
I have absolutely no idea... But if I am GA then it must be after 75-80ABY whenever I received the job...
Emperor Shadow
Well that's up to you to determine so long as it works in the confines of their characters. I'm just curious because there's a lot of literature describing the Imperial Palace of Kroprulu, not so much for Kuat, etc. But at this time, the story seems pretty unhinged from the forum's reality.
If you want to make it fit in, drop me or Acrimonus a line with any questions.
Darth Malice
Interesting take. I don't mean to be a nit-picker but my character doesn't tend to crack jokes and the bit with Marix just wouldn't happen. Malice has too much respect for certain superiors. Sorry, don't want to offend anyone but I just thought I'd point that out.
Emperor Shadow
I love the qualification of "some."
Darth Malice
Ha Ha! I always speak the truth!
Darth Barad-Dur
I don't think it needs to be really all that realistic if it's fanfic. But, for timeframe, I would say about...80 ABY or there about. Oh, and, sorry for the typos. I've got alot to do, and getting that much on is a miracle in the shape it was.
Edit: aboput you pulling the joke on Marix, I just thought it would be fun.
Anyways, next stop: His Imperial Majesty, the King of France!
Supreme Commander Alor
Me no likey that next part...
it makes me look incompetent, where I am not... I never approved your course of action, I never even knew about the Clones (IC'ly)
Grand Inquisitor Prognie
It's a fan fic... -_-
Supreme Commander Alor
But I was going to use it in my bio...
Grand Inquisitor Prognie
-shrug- I guess you will reconsider then.
Darth Barad-Dur
That is easily fixed.
Here's a quick, spur of the moment explanation on how you knew: You gave me a through tounge lashing along the way back about not pursuing the clones until I presented my reasons for not.
High Inquisitor Gra'tua
You've spelled gaurd wrong almost every time you spelled it.
Darth Barad-Dur
Yeah, I noticed after I had posted. I was typing really fast because I had only a little bit of time to do it.
High Defender Adenn
High Inquisitor Gra'tua wrote:
You've spelled gaurd wrong almost every time you spelled it.
[[Its Gu"a"rd not G"a"urd...look it up]]
Supreme Commander Alor
heh heh...
Look who's talking, Adenn, you've spelled it wrong in your signature...!
Darth Barad-Dur
In that case, I'm right.
Supreme Commander Alor
Trap? for Geand Admiral Marix AND Emperor Shadow?
Darth Barad-Dur
You'll see what I do. I think you'll approve of what happens (except you die) .
Supreme Commander Alor
That might put a cramp on my bio... and life for that matter...
Darth Barad-Dur
Yeah it would. You would have to become someone else to stay on the forum. But, you'll find out what happens tommorow.
Sovereign Defender Tarna
I do enjoy the Guard's annoyingness, gives us some flavor.
However, I do not like our lack of presence in the Palace. We'd have the whole building locked down.
Darth Barad-Dur
Shadow Protector Tarna wrote:
I do enjoy the Guard's annoyingness, gives us some flavor.
However, I do not like our lack of presence in the Palace. We'd have the whole building locked down.
You pretty much do have it all locked down.
Supreme Commander Alor
Marix actually likes clones, or at least he doesn't hate them.
Spoiler:
He himself is the product of genetic enhancement/cloning in a way.
His saber is double sided, silver and red, just in case you need that info. It also splits into two sabers if needed or prefered...
Darth Barad-Dur
Marix don't like clones that try to kill him and take over his ship either. Thanks for the lightsaber info, it'll come in handy later on.
Darth Barad-Dur
I thought my last chapter would generate some discussion.
And, yeah, you can use part of the story for your fanfic.
