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Discussion: Duty and Service: Seamus O'Riley | Quote: | Background:
I was given the assignment in my English class to create an original character to use for 10 different, independent stories about his/her life, starting with their birth and randomly jumping around the rest of their life, including their death. My first idea was going to be a SW FanFic about my other character Jarik Sol, but my teacher didn't want it in the Star Wars Universe, so I set out to create my own universe. |
When that work, some of you may have seen my Tales of Andranh on TDSL, failed to meet my teachers desires as well as my own, I decided to switch characters and worlds and rewrite the stories that I had already written, this time with Seamus.
Just a note: The different additions/posts may or may not be in chronological order. So please try to read the handy "Dates" I leave throughout the story to help you through. For example, the 2nd Article takes place after the 3rd, but is posted before it. The posts go in the order I wrote them, which is in the order my teacher assigned them, which is random and up to his twisted mind.
Comments, Constructive Criticism, and Questions are welcomed.
Please enjoy.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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I must say, I'm liking the story, but I honestly thought it was a comedy when I first saw the title.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Thanks.
The title is prone to change, I just didn't like my "Seamus O'Riley (I don't have a title yet)" which was the title before "Duty and Service". I tried to think of something better but that's what came to my mind.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Any ideas for the next chapter? Its a "whatever you want to write about" assignment, so I'm open to ideas.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Got the next chapter up. Comments?
http://thedarksithlords.myfreeforum.org/sutra125511.php#125511
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High Prophet Crozeus
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I like it. You spelt Marine wrong in the opening paragraph.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Great. Should have told me before I passed it in today.
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