Xander Vos
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Discussion of: Destiny EclipseAs I have released it on Rebels, so to will I release it here, and I shall try to keep the updates concurrent, so you Sith don't have to go to the Jedi site to read this.  All discussion should take place here.
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Darth Acrimonus
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Nice set-up so far. Given the amount of time that's passed since you announced it on Rebels and released the first installment I'm sure we can expect great things.
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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How does Minious fit into all of this?
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Darth Acrimonus
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Only one person knows. I'd say - much like tLoES - the rest will become clear to everyone else in time.
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Xander Vos
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Thank you for the support. Darth Minious, I added in to the first chapter just to show that Xander Vos, a young boy, has the same aspirations as a Sith Lord, but Darth Minious does have more of a role as the story progresses, and if you read my bio on Rebels for my profile, you will see he has a very large hand in Xander's life.
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Brigadier General Matas
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Now another mistake.....Nar Shaddaa is a moon as we discussed before  
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Xander Vos
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Not a mistake. A young child who was there perhaps only long enough to know its name is nto going to immediately realise its a moon, and even if he did, a moon is just a smaller planet, and is only classified as a moon by our Terran scientists. I know thats stretching it, but it is such a minor detail you needn't get worked up about it. Thats nearly the only thing in the entire story so fsr that I guessed with.
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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I think Shadow, and LoES, has a rival.
Great new chapter, Xander.
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Xander Vos
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Aw, its not that great. 
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Emperor Shadow
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I'm rather insulted by the concept that I would invest so much of my time and energy to create a world just for some sort of competition or pissing match with literature.
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Darth Acrimonus
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| Quote: | | I'm rather insulted by the concept that I would invest so much of my time and energy to create a world just for some sort of competition or pissing match with literature. |
I don't think Tarna meant it that way, Shadow. Your fiction is without a doubt the most popular on the forum, and I think Tarna simply meant to say that Xander had written his just as well.
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Emperor Shadow
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Hence my 'with literature' comment. I prefer not to think of anybody's work as any kind of competition be it friendly or not.
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Xander Vos
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What? So you'd rather have your fiction the unquestioned favourite over all? That's not fair. Everyone will make comparisons bewtween RPs, between different FFs, and for you to take a comparison like that as an insult is a bit out there... 
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Xander Vos
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New chapter, Ackin makes an appearence as Minious' Apprentice momentarily.
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Darth Acrimonus
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There is a lesson here for everyone to learn - never be employed at a space port...
I'm guessing that was the first 'chance' encounter between Minious and Xander, and that more are to come. I eagerly look forward to your next update.
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Alex made a grammar error!
| Xander Vos wrote: | | I see you becoming a powerful Sith Lady, with far more respect from the individuals of the Empire then i ever could. |
The world is ending!!! 
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Xander Vos
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 Word didn't pick that up!!!
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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Sure, blame the computer 
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Xander Vos
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| Commander Acrimonus wrote: | There is a lesson here for everyone to learn - never be employed at a space port...
I'm guessing that was the first 'chance' encounter between Minious and Xander, and that more are to come. I eagerly look forward to your next update. |
Ha, yes, I do feel a slight bit of guilt towards the impending death of those brave men and women doing their duty.
Yes, but don't worry, there isn't many to come in the NEAR future, because I wanted to make it believable. Having my two characters constantly run into each other before Minious kills Xander (Its in my Bio, so its not a spoiler) is a bit of a stretch.
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Brigadier General Matas
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both of you will be old when he kills you. He's like what, 345232406959869 years old and Xander is 70 or something?
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Darth Aerris
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(Xander Vos for some one who betrayed the Sith Empire you sure go on DarkSith Lords alot . . . )
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Brigadier General Matas
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To understand Xander you have to be Xander, and Australian
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Darth Aerris
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I see . . . Matas
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Brigadier General Matas
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Glad to be of assistance...and Mexican
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Darth Aerris
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YOu remind me of this kid in my school, that after everything he says, he will add, "Just because im Native,"
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Brigadier General Matas
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I remind myself of him too
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Darth Aerris
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LOL, yet some how you dont know him.
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Brigadier General Matas
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you sure? maybe I'm psychic..OOOOOOOOOO *does ghost hands and moves wierdly*
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Darth Acrimonus
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| Quote: | | To understand Xander you have to be Xander, and Australian |
I don't think that's entirely true. As most are well aware I too come from that 'Great Southern Land', yet cannot claim to have any more insight into Xander's mind than any other member of this forum.
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Xander Vos
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| Darth Aerris wrote: | | (Xander Vos for some one who betrayed the Sith Empire you sure go on DarkSith Lords alot . . . ) |
Please don't talk about matters you don't know. I left here, I did not betray it. I return because I have the maturity to go beyond feuds that were settled in the past. A lot of Sith go on Rebels, so I fail to see the problem with Jedi going on TDSL. Now, unless you have something about my story to comment on, I'll ask you to refrain from posting in this thread.
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Brigadier General Matas
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So Xander is special, if you catch my drift
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Xander Vos
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I just get very annoyed when people who don't know much - in his case he wasn't even a member then - comment on things as if they are a master, and disrespect others, about events they know nothing about.
Look at the sequence of events. I left here, honourably, then "became" a Jedi. I understand the turmoil surrounding me being a Jedi, but it is much to complicated for me to explain to anyone.
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Darth Acheron
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Well, DE is finished and fully posted on Rebels, but forgive me if I don't have the effort to fully copy it across. Any of you who have been reading it probably visit Rebels occasionally anyway.
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