Lord Aequitas
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Discussion of: The Valorum TalesI've just posted the first chapter to my life story. Any feedback is welcomed but just post it here.
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Lord Aequitas
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Also, if you'd like to be mentioned, let me know here.
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Major General Celestial
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I would like to be mentioned. Why not mention your best sith friend? 
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Lord Aequitas
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Fair enough.
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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FYI, this is in the wrong area. I will put it Storytelling where it belongs, and change the name to Discussion of: The Valorum Tales
Oh, yeah, and mention me. 
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Lord Aequitas
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OK!!!
Posted Chapter 2!!
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Lord Aequitas
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Tarna, mentioned you in Chapter 3 which I just posted.
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Darth Cruiciatus
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I was listening to Kashmir by Led Zeppelin while reading this amazingly written story. The song made it so much more epic, more than it already was, and right now i am impatiently waiting for the next chapter. Good job on such an amazing piece of literature.
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Lord Aequitas
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Thanks. I'm a third way through the 4th Chapter.
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Darth Cruiciatus
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sweet. I'm gonna bookmark your fanfiction thread.
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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I just read Chapter Three. Very nice, I almost wanted to see me walk back in and own the living daylights our of that random Jedi. 
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Lord Aequitas
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Let's just say it would be like him having stuck his fingers in a socket - he got a "shock".
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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| High Prophet Aequitas wrote: | | Let's just say it would be like him having stuck his fingers in a socket - he got a "shock". |
Hahaha, I get it...like Force Lightning.
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Lord Aequitas
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Yes, like that. Well, now everyone knows, it was Lord Tarna who brought me to the Empire. IC, not OOC. OOC, it was Darth Google.
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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Good old reliable Darth Google, he's always recruiting so well.
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Lord Aequitas
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Yes, he is. Anyway, I'm 2/3 way through chapter 4, should have it up tomorrow.
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Darth Cruiciatus
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awesome. i am looking forward to it.
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Lord Aequitas
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Due to a Chapter overlap, Chpt 4 will be taking a little longer; details, my friends, details...
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Darth Cruiciatus
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Gah!!!!!! Hurry up. I guess I shouldn't rush greatness however. 
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Lord Aequitas
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Haha, it's not that good. What do you like about it.
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Darth Cruiciatus
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The fact that it isn't so much into detial that you have to go onto wookieepedia to look up stuff to understand it. I've been out of the whole Star Wars thing for a year and forgot a lot, so its nice to have one that isn't overly-complicated.
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Lord Aequitas
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Oh, thanks.
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Major General Celestial
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I like how it involves so much, and the detail is incredible.
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Lord Aequitas
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Now, I am confused...
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Major General Celestial
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May I ask why?
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Lord Aequitas
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Samuel said little detail and you said a lot.
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Darth Cruiciatus
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Cause of what I said.
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Major General Celestial
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Really, I feel there is much.
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Lord Aequitas
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Fair enough...
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Darth Cruiciatus
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WHARRGARBL.
So, erm, it's been a month. Don't want to pressure you or anything, But Another chapter would be nice. 
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Lord Aequitas
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BUGGER!!
I forgot all about this!
I've been hyper-busy and I'll start again with Cptr 4 soon.
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Darth Cruiciatus
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Okay.
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Lord Aequitas
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Finally posted it.
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Darth Suspiria
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Very well done! Excellent.
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Lord Aequitas
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I had forgotten all about it.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Nice one. I was wondering what happened to this.
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Lord Aequitas
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I had forgotten too.
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High Mage Serratus
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Very nice, simple and effective.
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Darth Cruiciatus
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Took you long enough.
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Lord Aequitas
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Thanks
I'm sowwy.
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Darth Cruiciatus
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just get the next chapter up soon. 
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Lord Aequitas
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Chapter 5 is now finished and will be posted.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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I like it a lot. Did you use what people actually said when you joined? Like | Quote: | | In my eyes, which are frankly the only ones which matter, |
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Lord Aequitas
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Yeah, but I had no internet when I wrote it so it was from memory.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Cool. I think it is very good
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Lord Aequitas
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Thanks.
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