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Supreme Commander Alor

Discussion: The Characters of Marix

Here any comments, questions, concerns, and likewise may be voiced for The Characters of Marix

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Character List:

Markaro Vos
Al'ysa Khal
Jarik Sol
Sarona Vel
Dradin Laxan Kilron
Valence Geria Tonson Dooku
Jeridan Kerath Shepard Durin Giles
Lucius Vos
Xander Vos

How is your character related to Quinlan, out of interest?
Emperor Shadow

You're studying the art of small?

Oh, and your abilities reflect a Dark Lord... I'm just puttin' that out there.
Supreme Commander Alor

Emperor-

Sorry, I had copied Praxeum's format, but forgot to take out and change the powers, i was going out very soon, and just edited what i thought of, and forgot the rest.

Xander Vos-

I am his 2nd? cousin. The son of his cousin's son.
Xander Vos

Ah, ok. Cool. So you are on my father's generation then, meaning you were born sometime BBY. Confused
Supreme Commander Alor

Xander Vos wrote:
Ah, ok. Cool. So you are on my father's generation then, meaning you were born sometime BBY. Confused


No. I am your generation. My father would be in BBY. Quinlan's cousin was my grandfather. (The 2nd removed deal kills me. Maybe it's third?)
Isaah

Well.. my character's bloodline is in ancestry to the Vos and Qel-Droma bloodlines.. so if you're a Vos.. then you're related to me. My character came before Quinlan Vos and Ulic Qel-Droma. So.. I'd be like a ... great (x1000) uncle or something like that.

And I'm curious.. why, and how, do you have 9 lightsabers? I have two single sabers and gauntlet sabers.. and I was said to be a "terminator" of sorts.. if I'm a teminator.. what would that make you? Wink
Supreme Commander Alor

I usually like to be prepared for anything, but, Uncle *said like a whiny kid*, i have changed it down to 4.
Xander Vos

I didn't see the extra son. So you're born anywhere from about 5-20 ABY?
Supreme Commander Alor

I actually haven't compiled a birthdate yet, but that sounds about right. I am working on the rest of the bio/profile.
Supreme Commander Alor

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Darth Acheron

If you'd like, you could always be Xander's brother unless you explicitly like it the way it is.

Xander lives home in 4 ABY, and his parents are killed *I think* in 18 ABY, don't have my story open in front of me, so you could be born anywhere between then if you wanted, making you anywhere between 13 and 1 when they die.

Though if you like the whole born on Corellia then, it doesn't matter.
Supreme Commander Alor

I ahve been thinking about revamping my whole bio for a while, and I will gladly consider that into my new bio. I doubt that he will be born on Corellia in my new bio, that was more for his Kiffar/Corellian blood, but halfbreeds aren't allowed. So he will most likely become a full born Kiffar on either Kiffu or Kiffex.

Thank you Acheron...

EDIT: Could you give me a copy of Xander's bio, so that I may read it and try to keep mine and yours canon...
Supreme Commander Alor

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((Acheron- I grabbed Xander's bio off of Rebels, so I should be okay for now. Though if you'd like to help, feel free to do so.))
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Re: Darth Marix

Edited
Supreme Commander Alor

EDITED: Ranks & Occupations
Supreme Commander Alor

EDIT: Lightsaber forms and added a Quotations section near the bottom.
Supreme Commander Alor

EDIT: Ships.
Supreme Commander Alor

EDIT: Occupations, Affiliations, and Apprentices.
Supreme Commander Alor

EDIT: Lightsaber Combat
Supreme Commander Alor

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Lightsabers
Force Powers
Apprentices


If an Admin or Mod sees this, could they please split the topic. I'd like to have the first post be one topic, and the discussions be another.

Entitled:

The Characters of Marix [First Post]
Discussion of Marix's Characters [Other posts]
Supreme Commander Alor

EDIT: Marix's bio was revamped a little. A little bit of everything was changed/bettered.

Al'ysa Khal was added as an NPC used by Marix.

Admin/Mod: I've taken care of what I wanted done on my own. It actually worked out better this way. Thanks anyway.
Supreme Commander Alor

I figured that since I'm using Jarik in an RP, I could post his bio. Jarik is my main non-Force Using character, just as Marix is my main Force Using character.
Supreme Commander Alor

Edited Marix's Appearance.
Supreme Commander Alor

I finally have the time and inclination to get my Biography done, especially with the timeline set now.

I would like to ask for quotes about Marix/Markaro Vos that could be used in my Biography (such as Praxeum has in his). I would like to have a quote at the beginning of each major chapter, one that defines Marix during that period in his life. I would also like to try to get a quote in every time I introduce a new character into Marix's life.

Ex:
So the first time Marix meets Shadow would have something like:

"The heir to the legacy of the Force. A true commander, and loyal servant of the Emperor. I have never met a better Sith." – Emperor Shadow (Stated after Markaro Vos completed his Military training and served valiantly at the Taking of Coruscant.)

Or at the beginning of the chapter on his Military service:

"I have never known a Sith to rise so quickly through the ranks while contributing much more than his peers did, even though they had a much larger period of time to do so in." – Dark Lord Acrimonus (Stated during his resignation address after he named Darth Marix as his successor.)

You can contribute more than one quote if you want. I'll be sure to place a segment in my Profile for "Quotes About Marix" in case I can't use your quote in the Biography.

Thanks.
Supreme Commander Alor

Supreme Commander Marix wrote:
I finally have the time and inclination to get my Biography done, especially with the timeline set now.

I would like to ask for quotes about Marix/Markaro Vos that could be used in my Biography (such as Praxeum has in his). I would like to have a quote at the beginning of each major chapter, one that defines Marix during that period in his life. I would also like to try to get a quote in every time I introduce a new character into Marix's life.

Ex:
So the first time Marix meets Shadow would have something like:

"The heir to the legacy of the Force. A true commander, and loyal servant of the Emperor. I have never met a better Sith." – Emperor Shadow (Stated after Markaro Vos completed his Military training and served valiantly at the Taking of Coruscant.)

Or at the beginning of the chapter on his Military service:

"I have never known a Sith to rise so quickly through the ranks while contributing much more than his peers did, even though they had a much larger period of time to do so in." – Dark Lord Acrimonus (Stated during his resignation address after he named Darth Marix as his successor.)

You can contribute more than one quote if you want. I'll be sure to place a segment in my Profile for "Quotes About Marix" in case I can't use your quote in the Biography.

Thanks.


Updated, as I stated earlier.
- Languages
- Appearance
- Clothing
- Droids
- Biography (Not the whole thing yet. Expect a much longer Biography. Praxeum-length or close to it.)
- Affiliations
- Current Occupations
- Birth Year

Added - Former Occupations
Darth Thrax

I noticed in Jarik Sol's bio that he had a clone brother by the name of Devrin. That name sounds familiar. Smile
Supreme Commander Alor

Added a few characters to the list.

Sarona Vel - I had created Sarona for a user on another site, but the user never became active after I helped them out.
Dradin Laxan Kilron - Created for GLF, but I decided he can be useful here.
Valence Geria Tonson Dooku - Created for GLF, but I decided he can be useful here.
Jeridan Kerath Shepard Durin Giles - Created for GLF, but I decided he can be useful here.

Feel free to use the characters in RP's if you see them as helpful. Just let me know.

EDIT: Thrax- Yes, I was probably influenced by that name. I actually came up with those names when I was writing a story for school, and I just put down the first 4 names I thought of, lol.
Marius Praxeum

Wow!  Shocked

Someone put a lot of effort into creating characters. May I ask what "GLF" is?
Supreme Commander Alor

GLF stands for GalacticLegacyForums. A forum I run off of my own domain name.

http://galacticlegacy.dark-flame.net is our homepage. The forum can be found at: http://galacticlegacy.dark-flame.net/forum/index.php.
Marius Praxeum

Thank you. If I get the free time, I'll check it out some more. Nice flash page though.
Supreme Commander Alor

Thanks.
Supreme Commander Alor

Added Personal, no Official, residences for Marix.
Venedictos Appo

You mention Darth Eclipse as becoming the "Pariah" of House Dooku. I think you may be looking for "Patriarch".

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/pariah
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/patriarch
Supreme Commander Alor

I believe you are right. I thought it sounded weird when I was writing it. Thank you.
Venedictos Appo

No problem.
Lord Aequitas

In the interest of canon, I need to know how Markaro Vos knows all those languages fluently?
Supreme Commander Alor

A. It doesn't saw fluently. B. That is coming in the next segment of the biography.
Lord Aequitas

Ah well,

A. Languages spoken means Languages Spoken fluenty. Perhaps you should edit this? Or else put in brackets Mastered, Proficient etc

B. I can't wait to read it and find out how you can speak a variety of exotic languages.
Supreme Commander Alor

A. That just says "Languages" not "Languages Spoken". But yes, I was planning on such a system, like with my lightsaber forms, just haven't had the time to determine which gets what rating.

B. In due time. The next installment is roughly 40% done.
Lord Aequitas

Perhaps you should state more clearly in the future.
Supreme Commander Alor

I was under the assumption that my profile was in the format that I wished it to be, as there is no rigorous guide to follow, and that if Users had questions, as you did, that they would direct them to this thread where the questions would be answered.
Supreme Commander Alor

Added Lucius Vos, my alter ego.

Not completely done, but still workable.
Supreme Commander Alor

Updated Markaro's biography. Added Early Life chapter.

http://thedarksithlords.myfreeforum.org/about4323.html#bio_earlylife

(To keep it as a newer profile, which it is. I deleted and reposted my last character to bump the thread up. So no new character, just updates on Marix.)

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