Major General Celestial
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Duel of the MavensWhere: Korriban, where darkness surrounds everything, and where Celestial wants the apprentice to feel the real dark side.
Force powers: Yes
Rules: No killing. Also if I win, the apprenitce must change his name, if he wins, that will be his decision.
Are you ready Maven, especially after your bragging PM's? 
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High Prophet Crozeus
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((I will GM. I will be IC, for more fun  ))
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Maven
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maven arrived at korriban awaiting the sith master meditating for maven knows this will be his toughest challeng but there is no fear in mavens heart only darkness maven is redy for combat
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Major General Celestial
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(What is your consiquence if I lose?)
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Maven
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you have to find me a new master
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Major General Celestial
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(If it is up to your master, if it is fine with him, then so be it. If he sees this, respond and give your opinion, until then, I will take the smirk off this cocky boys face.)
Relak arrived at Korriban on his Naboo cruiser he has borrowed from the military for this occasion. He stepped out, following the newly arrived apprentice. The boy looked weak, and slightly inufficient. But Relak was still going to lay all on him, no more going easy.
Celestial bowed in his stance, Vaapaad, and then charged at the apprenitce. He used a force jump and hurled him self at the apprentice, although he twirled in mid-air, causing a spiral he knew no one to deflect yet, especially not an apprentice.
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Maven
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maven the moved out of the sit master way and charged at him with his lightsaber trying to get an early advantage in the duel
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Major General Celestial
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Relak did a summersault in mid-air, counter in the lightsaber with his double- blade. He Landed and then jumped behind the apprenitce. "Let's see how you like this." Relak jumped into the shadows of a nearby tomb. He used his stealth to stalk the young man, and finally pounced at him. He force pushed in mid-air and spun his saber three times at him.
(Make your posts long and detailed.)
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Maven
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maven then doged the sith master attack and jumped in the air and pounced on the sith master then maven tried stricke the sith master with his blade in the sith master heart
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Major General Celestial
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(I really doubt I would not put up any resistance, and I am not that easy just to be taken down by an apprentice.)
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Maven
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youwere just out played
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High Prophet Crozeus
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(( Not really. Here, if you are duelling someone of higher rank, 99.99999999% of the time, that person will win. ))
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Maven
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well do you want to continue
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High Inquisitor Gra'tua
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[[In other words you are power playing - dodging every attack - it is similar to god modding - hitting your opponent every time. Dueling is a give an take. Use your head, if it seems unlikely that you could dodge it then be hit by it, even if it is a minimal amount. I believe some literacy help and role play training would be in order to help you with this.]]
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High Prophet Crozeus
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((God modding can also be where you say that, as you did, "pounced on his opponent". It would be better to say something like "flew at his opponent/ launched himself at his opponent" etc))
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Lord Aequitas
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((Or pounced at his opponent))
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High Prophet Crozeus
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((Yeah. Use the imperfect.))
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Major General Celestial
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(Please edit your post, then we will continue.)
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