Maven
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i want to become a sithhere is my bio
Name: maven
Age: 14
Homeworld: tatooine
Species: human
Gender: male
Weapon(s): hopefully a light sber
Ship-dont have one
i want to be a sith because it has been my dream to rule and destroy anyone who gets in my way for power i want a master who will teach me the way of the sith and teach me to gain power and crush my enemies
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Darth Suspiria
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If your bio is approved I offer to be your Master.
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Maven
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i accept master Darth Suspiria i pledge my allegiance to your teachings master
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Supreme Commander Alor
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You still need a background. It can be short, but you still need one.
Something like:
| Quote: | | Maven was born on Tatooine to a poor moisture farming family. He grew up as normally as expected until one day. The Tusken Raiders had been more active than usual, but had never attacked a settlement in a while. When Maven was 16, he came home one day to find his house burning, his mother, father, and younger sister dead. His rage overtook him and he felt this power, something new, flow through his body. In that moment, he managed to lift the ruins of the house and blow them apart and outward. He was surprised by his power and wanted to know more. He buried his family, and headed off into the galaxy to learn more about his power... |
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Maven
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i was born a slave on Tatooine to a poor family. i grew up a slave father died in a pod race.with only his mother left until one day. The Tusken Raiders had kidnap my mother, but had never attacked him . When Maven was 16, his mother died, so with my mother and father dead.my rage overtook me in an unsusal way and i never felt this power, something new, flow through my body. In that moment, i managed to lift the ashes of the my house and blow them apart and outward. i was surprised by my new power and i wanted to learn more. i buried my mother, and headed off into the galaxy to learn more about his power...
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Supreme Commander Alor
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I see you managed to copy parts of what I wrote and try to make it your own. Didn't really work out, some grammatical editing needs to be done. But I see no further reasons to withhold this from you.
Your Profile is Approved.
Darth Suspiria, you have already trained an apprentice. I believe that your previous apprentice along with the new Darth Odin need to train an apprentice. So please allow them the chance to offer their services. If they do not in 2 days, then this pairing shall be approved.
- Supreme Commander Marix
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Maven
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so i must find a master now right
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High Prophet Crozeus
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You must wait for people to make offers, primarily those who haven't trained anyone yet. Then, you pick which one you want.
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Darth Mortis
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I was under impression one cannot train an apprentice unless he\she reached the Master rank. Anyway, I have no quarrel with Suspiria training this one.
P.S. Oh, Maven you should pay attention when copying something, it is said in your profile that your character is 14 at the moment, and in the bio he is suddenly 16 
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Maven
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yes master will you be my master and train me to be a great sith lord
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High Prophet Crozeus
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| Darth Mortis wrote: | I was under impression one cannot train an apprentice unless he\she reached the Master rank. Anyway, I have no quarrel with Suspiria training this one.
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Traditionally this is overstepped as we have no (active) Sith Master Second Degrees, so lower ranks (like me, Suspiria, Cruciatus) can train.
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Maven
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so you will train me then
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High Prophet Crozeus
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I have offered to train "V". My very wise and talented friend, Darth Suspiria, has offered.
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Maven
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well i accept Darth Suspiria to be my master
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Darth Suspiria
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We need to wait now to see what Darth Odin wishes. Are they the only two Supreme Commander? I will gladly wait. That is not problematic in any way. Be patient Maven. And thank you Prophet Crozeus for the nice compliment.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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I believe they are the only two. If not, then I am sure they will find their way here or to V's thread.
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Supreme Prophet Praxeum
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I, Dark Lord Praxeum, hereby offer my teachings to you, Maven. Do you accept?
Also, as Dark Lord I can approve this pairing, but I would like another member of my sub-council to approve/disapprove this as well.
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Maven
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yes master i accept i swear my allegiance to you master/what shall we train on first my master
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Supreme Prophet Praxeum
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First, I wish for patience from you, my student. You shall not find me an easy master, and my first requirement of you is that I do not wish for you to post in this thread again until I have informed you that our training thread is open. I see great potential in you, but this lesson must be taught first.
Is there a Council of Sith Population and Rank member on to approve us?
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Maven
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i will do what i am told my master
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Emperor Shadow
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If the Supreme Prophet has agreed to train Maven, then the pair is approved.
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Maven
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so im an apprentice now
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Supreme Prophet Praxeum
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If Maven refuses to follow a simple task of not posting in one thread, then I no longer wish to take him as my apprentice.
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Maven
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im sorry master it wont happen again
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Maven
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i do not want you as my master anymore i need to find a new master who will avtually train me to use the dark side of the force
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High Inquisitor Gra'tua
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Perhaps you should learn to have patience, and also have the ability to follow simple Orders.
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High Inquisitor Gra'tua
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[[I know double post.]]
Dark Lord Praxuem. I have spoken to your apprentice and he is willing to follow orders and show some sort of patience. I hope you will take him under your wing once more and train him. If he fails you again I will take him myself.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Maven: One thread is sufficient for your needs. You have consistently created a new thread for the same purpose as this one. That is considered Spamming, and will not be tolerated.
You are now Dark Lord Praxeum's apprentice, you accepted him, now accept the tasks he presents to you. You had the choice before and made it, now prove your strength and endure it.
I believe that is final, unless Lord Praxeum no longer wishes to train you, you will be his apprentice.
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Maven
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ok
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Mage Superior Odin
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Sorry for not realizing this thread before (you know i was away), if its okay for you, I can train Maven, if its Matt's, its also okay for me. Please respond to this ASAP, so things can get clear
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Maven
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i accept the teachings of Darth Odin to be my master
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Emperor Shadow
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Last chance, make it count.
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Maven
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yes my lord Darth Odin will be my only master
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Mage Superior Odin
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With one last approval of Praxuem, I will start Maven's training
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Maven
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so we cant start now
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Mage Superior Odin
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To all, firstly I will launch a thread to teach Maven how to roleplay, then he will be forwarded to IC training
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Maven
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yes my master
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Supreme Prophet Praxeum
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As I said, I do not wish to train him any longer. He is all yours.
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