Inquisitor Lorn
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Lorn's StoryThis is his life story and my first sw fanfic comments are appreciated.
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Inquisitor Lorn
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Chapter I:Early Life
It was a cold dark night when Lorn was born to his parents Gorth and Marla who were a middle-class family on the planet of Corellia. The only sounds that came from the house that night were the sounds of a new baby boy. Gorm said to his wife Marla
"We will call him Lorn."
Lorn and his family lived a normal life in their community. One day Lorn was at his school and agroup of kids came up to him and said
"Give us your lunch or else."
Lorn knew what the or else was, it was that they would beat him up and then take his lunch away. Lorn suddenly felt hate spurt within him and said to the kids
"No."
The group of kids then had two of them pick him up and carry him to the side of the building where none could see them. they made a circle around him making shure he could not escape. The leader of them said to the others
"Get him!"
They all jumped at Lorn who just stood there. Lorn did not know how to fight then so he tried to hit them but instead they just beat him up and took his lunch and walked away lauphing. Lorn swore in his mind that he would take revenge on them one day for what they had done.
He got up off the floor and went to the school nurse so that they could treat his injuries and call his mother so she could come pick him up from his school. When his mother arrived she asked Lorn who had done this he responded and said
"I just tripped on the ground and lost my lunch."
His mother knew that this was not it but she did not question him further on it. She took him home so that he could recover. The next day after school was over he went to the city and looked for a place that he could learn how to fight.
(I will try and update this as much as possible)
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Inquisitor Lorn
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Chapter II: Beggining of Hate
He caught a bus into the city were he knew someone who could teach him the skills he needed to know. He got off the bus in the middle of the city exactly were he needed to be to find this friend of his. He found the alley and then started to walk down it until he found a steel door with a small window in it. Lorn knocked on the door and then the window slid open and a pair of eyes looked out and when he saw Lorn he said
"What's the password"
Lorn respoded
"Sith"
in a whisper. The steel door slid back and closed even faster after Lorn enetered. He walked into a dimly lit room and there in the center of it was a figure cloaked in a dark robe. The figure in the dark robe then said to Lorn in a deep sounding voice
"What is it you need my friend?"
Lorn responded
"I am in need of matial arts skills to protect myself"
The robed figure appeared to smile and then he said to Lorn
"If you wish to learn more about martial arts then you must follow my teachings to the letter."
Lorn responded
"I will sir."
This robed figure was in fact a Sith sent there to recruit force-sensitives for the Sith. The first time the two of them had met he had sensed that Lorn was force-sensitive. He had been planning ways to get Lorn to join them and now the opportunity finnaly has presented itself.
The cloaked figure then said to Lorn
"I will teach martial arts but you must be here everyday when you can get some free time. For your first lesson I want you to tell me if you have ever felt great hate building up inside of you?"
Lorn replied
"Yes I have."
The robed figure then said
"Good now for today I want you to learn to let go of this hate and let it control you for if that happens you will learn to defend yourself."
Lorn then said
"I will master"
The robed figure then said
"Now leave and return here tommarow for more training."
With that Lorn left the building and returned home taking the figures lessons in mind. He would return and continue to learn from this figure no matter what.
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Inquisitor Lorn
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Chapter III: Sith Beggining
Lorn continued his training with the robed figure and over the time of these lessons he had learned to center his anger upon a dislike for the Jedi. One day after he arrived at the door of the robed figure's residence the robed figure walked up to Lorn and said
"I am glad you have learned much from me but now you must leave this planet to continue your training in martial arts."
Lorn was completely caught off guard by the comment that was just made by the robed figure. Lorn responded
"I will have to think about this because this was never part of our deal that we made. I will come back in a week with the descision I have made."
With that Lorn walked out of the room and went back to the bus stop where he caught a bus back to his house. He entered into his house and immeadietly went to his room to think about what the robed figure had just offered to him. He thought about this night and day for the entire week. Finally he decided that he would sneak out that night and go and meet this figure and tell him what he had decided.
Night came and he quietly snuck out of the house and went to get a bus to the inner city. When he arrived at the door and knocked on it. The slit slid open and a pair of eyes looked out at him and when they saw that it was Lorn the door immeadietly slid open to let Lorn in. Lorn walked into the dimly lit room and there as always there stood the robed figure in the center. Lorn walked up to him and said
"I have decided to continue with my training and go off world to where ever you tell me. I have a boring life here and wish for more excitment in my life."
The robed figure smiled and said
"Go to the starport and go to hangar bay 64 there you will find a ship that will take you to the planet."
Lorn did exactly as he was told and there was the ship as he was told. he entered into it and he sat down strapping himself into a seat. He felt the ship lift off and now he was heading to his new destiny. He arrived at the planet and was then brought to what appeared to be a temple and Lorn entered into it. There he spent the next year and then he was selected for training by a Sith named Darth Matas.
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