OOC: Alright. Relak this duel is for your Trials of an Apprentice. How you perform here shall be judged by the Dark Lord/Lady presiding over your trials. Perform well.
Location: Ruins in Kiffu
Weapons: Lightsabers of any kind
# of Sabers: 4
Force Powers: Non-lethal only
Let it begin!
IC:
Marix sat aboard the Executor-Class Super Star Destroyer. Outside of the grand ship, lay a planet that Marix knew well. Kiffu, his homeland. Here, Markaro Vos had been raised, here he had learned what he was capable of, and here he had his first kill. Marix drifted into the past, remembering the good and bad times, and was shaken out of his reverie only by the approach of his aide, Captain Demure.
Standing, Marix return the Captain's salute and began to walk towards the hangar bay. He had business upon the surface of the planet. Demure followed, as a dutiful aide would, listing of current updates from the Military HQ. Marix shook his head, wondering what would happen to the Military is he stopped his efforts to keep in organized and functioning, but quickly decided it best not to dwell on such things.
The turbolift doors opened, and Markaro was greeted by rows upon rows of armed soldiers, lined up ceremoniously to be inspected before Markaro departed.
Ahhh, the beauty of this job. Marix thought to himself. But it wasn't everyday that the Grand Admiral was passing through the hangar bay. For this trip, instead of taking his own fleets SSD, he had used one from another fleet, Dark Saber in fact, Lord Prognie's fleets command ship. He had taken the liberty of inspecting it's crew's and commanders' skills. Saluting the mass of men, women, and probably others, Marix headed for the Freighter in the center of the hangar. The Suwantek TL-1800 was Markaros's first ship, his pride and joy, and had followed him wherever he might be, as it had yet to et him down. Climbing up the ramp, Markaro began a preflight, and soon was off into the vacuum of space, heading for his home.
He only wondered if Relak was arriving soon...
Major General Celestial
Relaks TIE Advanced had just got out of the hyperspace route. He wandered across space in a rush. He was always ready for a duel. He landed in the ruins of Kiffu. There his opponent was to meet him. He climbed down the ramp and started walking in a line.
Lord Legacy
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((quick not of encouragment.Remember post length and alot of detail,good luck my apprentice))
Major General Celestial
( Yes my master.)
Supreme Commander Alor
The heavily modified TL-1800 cut through space, rapidly closing the distance between itself and the planet of Kiffu. Marix had seen and noted a TIE-Advanced fly into the atmosphere, and land near the area he himself was heading. Aboard, was a familiar presence, a fellow Sith called Relak. The freighter continued on its way, heading for an area of ruins in the Northern Hemisphere, landing far enough so as to give them ample room to fight, and the ramp lowered. Markaro, breathing the air of his home for the first time in many months, paused to let the memories clear from his head, and then walked out, his cape floating in the breeze, giving him a wraith-like appearance. He came forward, towards the apprentice, and taking out his saber, ignited it, saluted and bowed, then leaped into a defensive stance, ready for Relak to use his own weapon.
Major General Celestial
Relak bowed, showing respect to the superior. He also ignited the silver hilt of the double- bladed lightsaber. He rushed forward with a burst of speed, head on at His opponent. He made a horizontal spin trying to hit him.
Supreme Commander Alor
Marix easily sensed and parried the apprentices slash. As his saber connected, he rolled with it, igniting the second blade of his saber, which was now heading directly for Relak's torso, while Relak's own blade was still connected with the other side of Marix's.
Major General Celestial
Relak backstepped, though his saber was still connected. He ducked under the oncoming saber, just to meet the commanders other blade. He jumped over it and tryed to hit him with a roundhouse kick to the head.
(Is it okay if we GOD-Mod alittle. Just like"Marix swung his saber at Relak.")
Supreme Commander Alor
[[Controlling my character, to a limited amount, to give the Duel motion and flow, is okay. As long as it doesn’t turn into GOD-Modding. I of course, will in turn control your character to keep things rolling and give my posts more action. And please note: I am not the Supreme Commander but the Grand Admiral. Though I appreciate the honor and respect, it is a post/rank that I have yet to be presented.]]
Marix, even without the Force, could see the kick coming before it hit him, and used the Force to augment his agility and nimbly sidestepped Relak’s attack. The leg passed harmlessly a foot from Vos' head. Marix dropped his saber’s point, letting Relak’s blade pass to the ground. Leaping backwards, Marix released his saber from one hand, and shot out prongs of Force Lightning towards the young apprentice, not enough to kill, but certainly enough to cause pain and distraction.
Major General Celestial
The force lightning hit Relak, a move so fast he could not escape. The torture and the pain was agotizing, he was fading away. But yet the saber was still coming his way. He tried with all of his strength to at least move in the position. He was in the air, with no posture, so it made it hard to move. He saber still jolted in the ground, he managed to get his hand down to force pull it.
The saber locked into his hands, he picked the blade up and absorbed some of the force lightning, and deflected the oncoming lightsaber back into his hand. He fell to the ground gasping, then stood up, in defense position. He was worn out, and probably wouldnt last much longer against a sith like this.
Supreme Commander Alor
Marix let the last flares of electricity leap from his fingertips. Relak had been given a good, learning dose of Sith power. Marix watched as the weakened form rose from the ground. His limbs still trembling out of pain and shock. The already weary apprentice held his saber in a weakening defensive positon. Marix, contemplating his options, sent a small burst of lightning at him to test his reactions, and then followed the electric current. Using the Force to quicken his movements, he eloquently sliced the air when Relak's head was.
Major General Celestial
Relak saw the oncoming attack, he didnt know how to counter it. He stuck his saber out, just enough to catch the force lightning. Relak sent a force push torwards the higher ranked opponent, not knowing if it hit him or not.
Supreme Commander Alor
Marix felt Relak's weakening power send out a push towards him. It caught him as he was rushing forward, and stopped him cold, his own momentum and the Force Push negating each other. Marix reached out with the Force, and created a fist around Relak, constricting it and raising it from the ground at the same time. Relak squirmed in the ever tightening grip as it rose higher and higher from the floor.
Major General Celestial
The strict grip squeezed Relak until he couldnt breathe. His saber dropped and he was defenseless. He couldnt resist anymore, it was a good fight, but he knew the elder sith had won. The pain was too much, he had to give up.
"You w.. win Ma.. Marix. I giv..give up."His breating was getting lower, and he couldnt hardly move.
Supreme Commander Alor
Marix slowly released the hold, to a more comfortable pressure, and lowered Relak to the ground. Hitting a button on his commlink, a med droid came out from his ship, to attend to the young apprentice.
"There is potential in you. Practice your skills, duel often, and fight for the right causes. Your master has done a fine job, now it is up to you to continue what he started. Teach yourself, and learn from your mistakes."
Markaro looked around at the Kiffar ruins, and then watched the medbot care for Relak.
