[Mage Superior Odin]

Maven, please report here first

[Maven]

i am here master

[Maven]

what shall we do now master

[Mage Superior Odin]

Ok, firstly Im not your master here since its an OOC thread, so you dont have to call me master.

So lets start

Online Story Roleplaying is an active fiction drama generally being held with multiple participants. By using linguistic abilities, people act as characters of certain events by writing.

During story roleplaying, two things are very important.
1)Narrative skills
2)Creativity

By enhancing those two, you can become a good roleplayer. So we shall with Narrative skills.

First question. What is narration? Please explain

[Maven]

narration is some ones story that they have wrote

[Mage Superior Odin]

What is "Portrayal" and what is its role in a narration?

[Maven]

i dont know master

[Mage Superior Odin]

Alright, you need to learn portrayal in writing. I know this is boring, but you have to learn it if you want to roleplay here.

Firstly, lets make a human portrayal


Describe the girl first in an anatomic manner like body features, body position etc.

[Maven]

her body feature is nice and delagant her body position is laying down on the beach like she is having a good time. how is that

[Maven]

master when are we going to train on combat this is boring

[Mage Superior Odin]

You cant pass to that unless we are done with this

You have to be descriptive about her. Hair, eyes, skin, teeth etc. Even the most basic thing has many features so you have to portray them if you want to role play. I want certain words from you, this means not commentative words about the pic like nice and elegant, you have to give me specific details like "her hair is blonde" etc. Now try once more and describe everything you see about her

[Maven]

Hair-long and blond
eyes-look a litlle light brownish
skin-white tannish skin color
teeth-white

[Mage Superior Odin]

Please state them in sentences next time.

Now describe me where she is lying. Describe the background extensively. 3 lines minimum

[Maven]

she islying on a beach smiling at someething but i cant tell

[High Prophet Crozeus]

Lush forests, golden sand, clear water. Use metaphors and similies in it. You must have done descriptive writing before at school?

[Mage Superior Odin]

[Maven]

looks like on some sort of island with palm trees and a very bright sun

[Mage Superior Odin]

Ok, now lets call her Anna. Write a short story about what Anna did on that day on that beach. Think about what can be done on a beach and combine her body features, her feelings and background to portray the scene. I need a paragraph of min 3 lines

[Maven]

master can we do something else i know how torolplay now master

[Mage Superior Odin]

I prefer you writing this, but you cant get over this thread without writing. You can always change your master but I think everyone would ask to do this. If you are bored about this, lets move to Star Wars.

I need 2 paragraphs to narrate how Anakin killed Mace Windu while he was fightning with Palpatine. Start from Windu's arrival to office to arrest Palpatine, you dont have to write the dialogues, but at least you have to give us the idea. Think that you are explaning the scene to someone who has not watched Revenge of the Sith

[Mage Superior Odin]

Welcome back Maven. As a start of your roleplaying. Please do what I asked in the post above this one. (Anakin vs Windu) I just need 2 pharagraph summary, no big deal.

[Maven]

mace windu walked into the room with other knights of the order to come an arrest paplatine for anakin told mace windu that the chancellor was the sith lord and mace tried to arrest palpatine but it turned into a duel with only mace windu and the dark lord for that the darklord killed the other knights that accomied the jedi master.

anakin walked into the room and seen the jedi master about to kill the dark lord anakin told mace its not the jedi way and tried to tell mace that he must face trail and decide his fate but mace would listen and swung at the darklord and anakin initated his lightsaber and cutt off mace hand and left him vunerable to the darklord and which he used force lightning to finish the jedi master an anakin pledge himself to the darkside of the force

[Mage Superior Odin]

Ok that was good. Keep in mind that you must also use some dots and commas when you are writing something. I just wanted to tell that before someone warns you

[Maven]

yes master what next

[Mage Superior Odin]

We are done with this topic. An admin can lock this thread

[Maven]

what next my master