Supreme Commander Alor
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Preview and Discussion: The Tale of the ÁnradhPlease Note: At the current moment, I do not have a definite title for this work of literature. It will be added in later.
Background:
I was given the assignment in my English class to create an original character to use for 10 different, independent stories about his/her life, starting with their birth and randomly jumping around the rest of their life, including their death. My first idea was going to be a SW FanFic about my other character Jarik Sol, but my teacher didn't want it in the Star Wars Universe, so I set out to create my own universe.
I would like to know if anyone here objects to me using their character [Name, Parents, Physical Qualities, and Personality], not so much as a Sith or Force-User but as them in my universe. This will allow me to focus on the plot more instead of creating more and more characters. Also, several of your characters have wonderful personalities and quirks to them that would add to my story.
If anyone objects, just PM me, Email me, or post it here, and I will refrain from using your character.
Preview:
| Quote: | --- The year is twenty, twelve… and thirty, if one was to use the Terran system of time and continue it from their starting point; the birth of their religious icon. The year is also 2100 EE, Elron Era, elsewhere in the universe. But to us, those that have been and forever will be, time is but a trivial matter, small and fleeting. We are The Eternals. We have seen all since the beginning of time. We are the beginning of time, the creators and destroyers, the watchers and recorders.
We, as a collective, have witnessed the rises and falls of Empires, Nations, Species, Peoples, and Planets. The births and deaths of leaders and heroes. But by far the greatest, out of all that we have seen and done, is the creation of a legend…
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Lord Aequitas
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Don't want my character used.
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Emperor Shadow
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Use me away.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Thank you, Emperor Shadow. Your character definitely has a personality of its own. I am sure i can find use for you... 
Once I figure out the role(s) your character would be playing, I'll post here to inform you.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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You can use me, if you want. How long is this going to be?
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Major General Celestial
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You know you can use my character. 
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Grand Inquisitor Prognie
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Oh use Prognie! 
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Thank you all.
The assignment is only 10 stories, long enough to fit the criteria he tells us and also long enough to be good. I will probably, if the stories are good, write more than the 10.
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Darth Malice
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Use away my friend.
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Darth Suspiria
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More than welcome to use mine as tempermental as it is Supreme Commander. 
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High Prophet Crozeus
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You better post it on here
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High Inquisitor Gra'tua
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You may use my character.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Thank you, all.
I didn't use any of you in the first story because I had started it long before I posted this thread here asking. But I will try to work you in later on. Inquisitors might become Information Brokers, Prophets become healers/medics, Emperor will be some sort of tyrannical ruler of the Empire.
If anyone wants to be the head of a terrorist organization, let me know...
Also, after reading the first part, if you have any title ideas let me know.
My ideas so far are:
The Jarik Sol Chronicles Which I have already used, but would fit.
The Tale of the Ánradh
The Savior of Elron
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Grand Inquisitor Prognie
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Tales of Anradh
The first seems too Gary-stue and the third seems to mimic most franchises that exist today simply with the title.
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High Commander Vexen
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You have my permission to use ine character or any character I have created on any site.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Thank you, Vexen. I am sure that I can use you somewhere
Anyone read it yet? Check out the StoryTelling forum...
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Any comments?
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High Prophet Crozeus
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I'm liking it.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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More than one month later, I have an update for you.
Any comments?
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Darth Suspiria
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Very well written and interesting social dynamics.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Looking good. Why do you always use Jarik Sol?
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High Mage Serratus
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I thought I'd already said, but evidently not, Serratus is your's to use.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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| Prophet Crozeus wrote: | | Looking good. Why do you always use Jarik Sol? |
I was originally going to use the Jarik Sol Chronicles for this English Project, but my teacher didn't want Star Wars, he wanted an original universe. So I kept the same character traits and physical make-up and started my own universe. I would ahve used Marix, but he is more of a Military Commander and Sith. Since I couldn't use Sith, Marix would have been just a commander. He will appear in this story at some point, whether as a Military Commander or the Emperor or something like that...
Thanks Glanth.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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I meant the name. Why not make new characters for each?
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Supreme Commander Alor
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I am "attached" to the characters I have created so far. I guess. I'll create other characters for other stories, but I already had a complete bio for Jarik so it was easier at the moment [it was a school project] to use him instead of starting from scratch...
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Fair enough. I also like your chronicles, which I have on my PC (somehow)
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Did you copy and paste?
Thanks. I haven't touched the Chronicles in a while... Been too busy. But hopefully I'll get a chance to write out the next part soon...
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High Prophet Crozeus
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No, I think I must have downloaded it from your website... but I can't remember doing it... meh.
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Supreme Commander Alor
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Oh. I forgot I put them up there... lol
ITS COPYRIGHTED!! I'LL SUE YOU!! lol
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Don't worry I saw the copyright...
(note to self, change name)
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