Major General Celestial
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The souless one(Report here ooc wise. When posting OOC put brackets or parenthensis around your speech.)
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High Prophet Crozeus
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What is your wish, Master?
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Major General Celestial
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(Did you not read my post? () parenthensis. But that is not the point, first give me this information:
What faction I wish to join:
# of lightsabers:
What I wish to achieve:
Lightsaber form:
Lightsaber Color:)
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Lord Aequitas
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((Sorry to intrude but you did say put () around OOC posts, he did not post OOC, he posted IC))
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Major General Celestial
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(I told him to report OOC first of all. Sorry if I offend, but I wish for no further intrusions unless you are the MOD of this specific forum or the Emperor.)
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High Prophet Crozeus
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(What faction I wish to join: I am unsure, as of the moment, although I am inclined towards the Marauders. I would like to recieve more information before I make a decision.
# of lightsabers: 2, one short, one standard although he does not wield both at the same time
What I wish to achieve: Knowledge, training and ultimately power
Lightsaber form: many. Shii-Cho taught by the Jedi, Makashi taught by the Sith and Juyo and Niman being learned.
Lightsaber Colors: red and gold)
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Major General Celestial
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(A faction is such as the military not a class, such as marauder.
Military
Inquisitors
Alchemists
Royal Guard
Church.)
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High Prophet Crozeus
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(Ah, I see. I am still unsure)
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High Prophet Crozeus
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(I think being a Royal Assassin or getting into the Military, provided it is not permenant. Which would you recommend?)
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Major General Celestial
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(The road of the Assassin is the inquisitor. But try the Military, it has become a small bit active, and I am not sure what has changed really. But I am joining the Inquisitors, if you wish to walk in your masters footsteps.)
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High Prophet Crozeus
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(Well, an assassin feels more calling to me, so I will opt for the Inquisitors)
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Major General Celestial
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(Good, good. Now, we will continue IC wise.)
Relak sat in the samll training grounds that he had been gifted. The training process wasnt that familiar to him, for his first apprentice left right after they began. He hoped this apprentice would not be so.
What would this apprentice hold, he had not one idea. He would have to continue with, what he felt would be manditory. Perhaps some force training. lightsaber, assassin, spying, and then a special task. Five easy tasks he assume. He would jut figure it on the way.
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Major General Celestial
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(Choose your Dark Patron now. Mine is Darth Revan, and I assume by earlier posts yours is Vader?)
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus hurried into the grounds. Spotting his Master, Relak meditating nearby, he concealed himself with the force, and crept forwards, each footstep silenced by the Force.
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Major General Celestial
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(Try to make your posts more in depth, not just one sentance long. Make it be describing every action, what you think, what his actions are, and what is happening around him. By the way, try not to use such advanced force moves, remember, keep it realistic, you are yet but an apprentice.)
Celest opened his eyes as he sensed the whole force energy radiating from the apprentice."Welcome, now we may begin." He spotted the apprentices outer being as he sighed. Much work indeed.
(If I am being hard on you tell me, I dont want to be. I am just trying to help and improve.)
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High Prophet Crozeus
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(OK, thanks for the advice for posts. I was trying to make the point in my profile that Crozeus has been trained in the ways of the Jedi and Sith before, although not in much depth.)
Crozeus dropped to one knee, his head bowed down, partially in respect to his Master, partially to hide the wide grin that had broken out across his features, as he was unable to contain his excitement. 3 years he had waited for this. 3 years. His tall frame shook with anticipation, but he controlled the emotions inside him, ready to unleash them - when the time came. Crozeus sensed that his Master wasn't impressed with his clumsy attept to cloak himself and he began to feel nervous, but clearing his head he looked Relak straight in the eye.
"I am ready, Master."
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Major General Celestial
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"Great, what is your name, I do not think to have read it in the report."
He stood, showing his muscular body features. Apparently, he did not put on his Copied armor, for this was a featured masquerade of clothing, showing his handsome face and the muscles he had worked on for so long.
He looked at the apprentice, the bowing was not fooling anyone, especially not him. "Get up. We will work on your force powers. I want you to pull the force through your hand, focus it on the point that you want, and realease it into a force shock. A force shock is where you charge the force while in your hand and then realease it in a fury."
He pointed to the metal rod in the center of the room. This would contract the electricity.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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"I...I have no name. I cannot remember. the Jedi took it from me." Crozeus' voice shook with rage as he tried to remember. "I wish to be known as Crozeus, and one day the Jedi who made me the Souless One will come to quake in fear as my shadow bears over them - the shadow of Darth Crozeus!"
Crozeus was silent for a moment, breathing deeply, then screamed as the rage he had built up, all of his pent up emotions were charged as pure dark side energy and he unleashed not just a shock, but Force Lightning, greater than any he had summoned while being trained by the Sith Exile.
His eyes were burning with the reflection of the electricity, and a fire inside that fuelled his rage. Emotions flooded him, most of all, desire to please his Master, which would lead to the ultimate destrcution of all the Jedi who ever thought to take pity on him.
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Major General Celestial
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"Good. Now, I want you to verse me in a small duel, here in the training grounds, just to work on your skills."
Celestial ignited his red double-bladed lightsaber. He was ready to learn the apprentices weaknesses."No force powers, you have already demonstrated them.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus nodded, disappointed in the fact he couldn't use Force powers. He became angry, and turned his anger into strength behind his blade as he ignited his short lightsaber and took up the classic defensive position of Shii-Cho, perfect fro protecting himself against double bladed sabers.
Crozeus saluted, and merely waited for his Master to make the first move, probing his senses for an idea.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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(I am going away for a week but I will do my best to get to a computer)
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Major General Celestial
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Darth Celestial wouldnt make it too hard on the boy. Therefore he would just ease along, let his apprentice set the motion and so forth. What was to become of this one, this would tell.
Darth Celestial saw past the boys Shii cho, a simple jedi technique. He needed to learn Vaapaad. He sent a small burst of force lightning at the young one, aiming at the chest.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus easily read Relak's attack and quickly brang his saber to his chest to absorb the small lightning burst. He grinned and stepped forward, returning his blade to the ready position. He smiled at his Master, and beckoned.
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Major General Celestial
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"Very good, now I know you can read attacks, easy ones at least."
Relak Did a backflip into the Vaapaad stance once more. He beckoned the apprentice to come forwards, but instead, he charged. He did a jump at the apprentice extending his body forward and spinning. He created a forward spiral, aimed at the apprentice.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus was completely thrown off guard by the charge. Unfamiliar with Vaapaad, he knew that it channeled anger.
He grinned. "You'll find, Master, that I am full of suprises."
Letting the Force guide his arm, Crozeus changed forms to Makashi and met his charge, ducking low with his blade over his back.
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Major General Celestial
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Landing vertically on his hand, he flipped over and backflipped to the side of the boy. He thrust his saber to the right of his opponent, in a circular spinning motion to spiral into the boys side.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus sensed the blade incoming, and fell awquardly to the side, whipping his blade across to protect his flank. The blade cut scars in the floor and Crozeus silently cursed himself for expecting to catch a Sith Master out with such an easy move.
When his blade was in line, he pushed outwards, and forced Relaks blade outwards, towards his Master's chin, sweating with the exertion.
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Major General Celestial
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Relak sent a force push with his other hand to the saber, the saber thrust back out, avoiding any contact. This match was finished he had seen all he had to.
"Enough, this is good! You are very strong apprentice."
He looked to the somewhat panting apprentice. Relak was tired to, the apprentice showed a lot of stamina, and it had been a while since he had dueled.
"For you last test we will go on a master apprentice mission, but as of first, we shall rest, and talk. I will see if I may cantact someone over holodisc, they will ask you some questions, perhaps. Now sit, we have work to do. What is the thing you desire most? What is your most prized possesion? What is the thing you want to do most with your life?"
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus breathed deeeply and looked his Master straight in the eye.
"I wish to become a powerful enough Sith to kill the Jedi scum Kwai Jin Shii. I wish to be able to control the power that I know is inside me. I wish to become the scourge of the Jedi. I want to destroy them, and I am willing to do anything in order to see that through.
Crozeus shook with the emotion behind his words, and remembered one other thing.
"And I wish to be able to see my family again, just once."
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Major General Celestial
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"Very well. I wish for you to meet someone, he has impacted my life in many ways, and I wish for you to take the time to meet him."
Relak took out his holodisc, placed it on the floor and stood back. The Holodisc came on, and Relak pushed the apprentice forward."Dark Lord Tarna, how do you do?"
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus stared at the holodisc, at the hooded figure of the Shadow Protector. He never expected this. Nervous, he waited for Tarna to speak.
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Major General Celestial
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(When talking about someone in higher power than you always call them politely, instead of Tarna, Darth, Lord, or dark Lord. You may also call him by his affiliations, such as Shadow protector.)
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High Prophet Crozeus
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(Understood)
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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Tarna stood in his office on Bastion, but to Celestial and Cozeus, he was standing in the room with them. "I am well, Master Celestial. You there, apprentice, what is your name?"
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus bowed before the holocron.
"There is no name for me, Shadow Protector. Only Crozeus."
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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"Very well, Crozeus. Your master has told me that you wish to join the Inquisitors? Why is this?" Tarna said to the young apprentice.
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus bowed again.
"I am still undecided sir, and I have recieved offers from the Church as well. I seek first to learn about the different orders, and then to let the Force guide me in my decision. I seek to be a warrior, but secretively. Assassinations, spying and the like. The order which has a position for me like that is the one which I would go for."
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Sovereign Defender Tarna
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"Well, there are many ways to serve the Empire in such a fashion. The Military Special Forces, the Inquisitorius, and the Royal Guard all do that sort of work." The Dark Lord turned and nodded to someone out of their view of range. "It all depends on which of those Orders you would feel best in."
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus nodded, deep in thought. At last, he made up his mind.
"I have been in conversation with Supreme Prophet Praxeum. He says that I would fit the role of Dark Warrior for the Church, and I think that I will go for that position."
There was a deep sense of meaning inside Crozeus at that moment, and he knew he had made the right choice.
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Major General Celestial
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"Lord Tarna, I feel that this young ones training has come but to an end. Besides one last task. Thank you for your assistance. Goodbye."
He turned to Crozeus, expecting a burst of anything. His training was but to an end. Except for this one thing, one thing that would make him and Crozeus more strong.
"What do you wish to be called when you grow older. Your Darth title. Also, we will be going to three planets, to kill a Zakkeg, a Rancor and a Krayt Dragon. Of course in that order."
(I will go with you, to help. But I want at least two paragraphs per post, good ones.)
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High Prophet Crozeus
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Crozeus was speechless. This was everything he had ever wanted. He would set off as soon as he could, and his answer was already known.
"I wish to be known as Darth Crozeus, Master."
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Major General Celestial
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"Then so shall it be. Let us continue on, and we will make haste of this mission."
Celestial turned, facing the door, and walked out. He hoped his apprentice would become all great, and that he would strive for power. Only one way to tell.
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Major General Celestial
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(You are finished unless YOU wish to learn more. I shall make a new lesson plan to further more instruct you if you wish. Although, I have posted in the initiation chambers for you to get promoted, but if you do not feel yet ready, exclaim so.)
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High Prophet Crozeus
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((I feel ready, unless someone says different))
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Major General Celestial
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(Very well, it is up to them then. You have done good my apprentice.)
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