The Training of Qel'Vos' Apprentices

Isaah · The Training of Qel'Vos' Apprentices

*Darth Blight stood in complete silence as he awaited his apprentice. Blight began to show annoyance as he paced from left to right, with his hands crossed, and hung over his stomach.

<<Here is where you will now obtain missions. Your Roleplaying training will begin in full force now, I expect to see improvements. You may ask for other Sith apprentices or Masters to join in and train you if you feel you need more than just My help.>>

Show me what you already know about roleplaying, enter the room, and we'll begin there.

Lord Legacy

his young apprentice rushed in the room, panting for breath, " Im so sorry master" I got lost" It wont happen agian.

Isaah

Very good. Somewhat unknowledgeable, but still... acceptable because of your inexperience.

<<I'm going to list all of your missions for this week, you will have more than is required, but it will pay off in the end.>>

Your Missions:

1. Visit the Site in my Signature entitled "Sith History I" and find one of the Wars in our History. Search for information on that war, and post it in here.

2. Visit the Site entitled "Sith History II" and Find one topic of which to talk about. Search any other website and give me the information about it.

3. Visit my final Site Link entitled "Sith Masters" and find one Sith Master you believe to be the best, find any information on them and post it in here.

4. Use any means possible and find 3 important Sith Facts you did not know about, and put them up in here.

5. Think deeply about what position you would like to persue after becoming a Warrior/Acolyte and finally a Master.

<<I expect these to be done in good time, do not rush yourself and do a sloppy job. The key to roleplaying is proper grammar and understandable wording. Your roleplaying Training shall begin after your 15th Mission>>

Lord Legacy · the great sith war

Exar Kun left his Jedi Master, Vodo-Siosk Baas, because his master would not let him learn the deeper rites of the Dark Side of the Force. Kun journeyed to Onderon, where he received word of the existence of Freedon Nadd's tomb. Told by the ancient Dark Lord's spirit to go to the Sith mausoleum-world of Korriban, Kun obeys. Deep within a Sith tomb, Freedon Nadd's trap was sprung: triggering a cave-in, Exar Kun sustained horrible injuries. Nadd presented him with a choice: surrender to the Dark Side, or die. Refusing the dark ways, Kun opposed Nadd, who pulled down the temple roof above him, crushing him. At the last second, Kun relented. Nadd repaired his physical injuries...but with Dark Side energy. Kun, after being revived, then embarked upon a quest of testing and devotion. Travelling to Yavin IV, the newly-fallen Dark Jedi took over Naga Sadow's ancient fortresses there, enslaving the Massassi race to further his ambitious plans. Destroying Nadd's spirit for a final time, Exar Kun staked his claim as the true heir to the believed-dead Sith legacy

Lord Legacy · sith history 2/darth maul

Darth Maul was a weapon forged by the hateful energies of the dark side to ensure the victory of the Sith over the Jedi order. A creature of pure evil, Maul had no personality beyond his ultimate devotion to his master, Darth Sidious. His goal was singular -- to exact vengeance upon the Jedi for the decimation of the Sith ranks.
The Republic first came to know of Maul only as a mysterious attacker. While Qui-Gon Jinn was escorting the fugitive Queen Amidala from Tatooine to Coruscant, Darth Maul swept down from above, lunging at Qui-Gon from his rocketing Sith speeder. Maul's attack was relentless; he hammered down lightsaber strikes against the accomplished Jedi Master, forcing him back time and again. It was only the timely interception of Qui-Gon by the Queen's Royal Starship that spared him.

Qui-Gon was utterly surprised and unprepared for such an attack. The Sith, everyone knew, were extinct, disappeared from the galaxy for a millennium. Yet the evidence was there -- a dark attacker, trained in the Jedi arts, brandishing a lightsaber no less.

Maul was dispatched by Darth Sidious to track down the Queen, a feat he accomplished through mysterious yet effective means. Traveling aboard his sleek Sith Infiltrator, Maul scouted the galaxy for the missing monarch, and reported his findings to his master. When Amidala returned to Naboo, Maul was there, waiting to face the Jedi once more.

As an undeniable example of his skill and devotion, Maul plunged headlong into battle against two Jedi warriors. Using his double-bladed lightsaber, Maul held off both Obi-Wan Kenobi and Qui-Gon Jinn in the heart of the Theed Royal Palace. When the Jedi became separated, Maul killed Qui-Gon with a well-placed saber strike. Kenobi, enraged, attacked Maul. This barrage was deflected by Maul who used Obi-Wan's touching of the dark side as a conduit for a Force attack; using the Force, Maul pushed Obi-Wan into a deep mining pit. Kenobi held onto an outcropping for dear life. Calming himself by calling upon the light side of the Force, Kenobi was able to surprise Maul, and cleave him in half with his saber.

A pained look of bewilderment crossed Maul's tattooed face as death overtook him. His body fell into the melting pit, splitting in two as it tumbled into oblivion.

It was only a matter of time before Sidious acquired a new apprentice.

Lord Legacy · darth nihilus

"You are the darkness in which all life dies, mi‘lord." -- Visas Marr
"One cannot hold a power of that magnitude and still perceive the universe as we do." -- Kreia
Darth Nihilus is an infamous Sith Lord from the fictional Star Wars Expanded Universe and more specifically from the game Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic II: The Sith Lords. He is a shadowy figure that wears a red and white mask and is dressed in a black cloak, which is displayed on the game's cover art.

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History
Spoiler warning: Plot and/or ending details follow.
Darth Nihilus came to learn the very greatest of the Sith teachings; however, little is known of Nihilus's true beginnings, some believe him to be a survivor of the Mandalorian Wars, and might have been at one point a prisoner of the Mandalorians. After the war he was found by Darth Traya to be Force-sensitive, and she began training him in the ways of the Sith at the Trayus Academy on Malachor V.

Through a vision Traya shares with the player, it is revealed that after his true powers and potential were realized, Nihilus, along with fellow Sith student Darth Sion, plotted and turned against their dark mistress. They cast Traya down, stripped her of her power, and expelled her from the Sith Order. Their reason for doing this was because Traya insisted on fighting a "shadow war" against the Jedi, as she tells the Jedi Exile. Nihilus and Sion preferred a direct, much less subtle approach. Nihilus chose to destroy the Force-sensitive planet of Katarr (and much of the remaining Jedi Order with it); Sion chose to lead his sect of Assassins in destroying the remaining Jedi.

Darth Nihilus ravaged and consumed whole worlds to feed his insatiable appetite for power. This was conducted from the bridge of his flagship, the Ravager, which appears as a playable location later in the game. Nihilus's powers were so all-consuming that all those who came into contact with the Sith Lord became slaves, mindless servants to his will, as seen in the crew of the Ravager when the player comes across the ship.

One such servant of Nihilus was Visas Marr, a Miraluka female from Katarr, a planet consumed and destroyed by Nihilus. The Sith Lord sent Visas on a mission to find and bring the last of the Jedi before him, so that he could consume his power and essence. But this would be the mighty Sith Lord's undoing - the Jedi Exile broke her from Nihilus's bonds after she boarded his ship, the Ebon Hawk, and she subsequently turned against her former master.

Nihilus was informed of hundreds of Jedi on the planet Telos. Setting his fleet out to the planet, Nihilus was surprised when he found out that no "Jedi" were on the planet. His ship was subsequently invaded, and on the bridge of the Ravager, Nihilus attempted to absorb the Exile's Force energies, only to weaken himself, possibly because the Exile was a void in the Force, much like himself. The Exile, together with Mandalore Canderous Ordo and Visas, defeated the Sith Lord on board the bridge of the Ravager. After his death, his body dissolved in an aura of dark side energies. Visas also gives the player the chance to take the Sith Lord's mask after he is defeated.

What happened to Nihilus after his body dissolved is unknown. Whether he is truly gone shall remain a mystery. Interestingly, his true identity is not revealed even when Visas looks at his face after his defeat, leaving questions about whether his previous personality may have been anyone of consequence. Visas, being able to see the world solely through the Force, merely says when she looks upon him that she sees a thousand graveyard planets and an eternity of hate and hunger. It is interesting to note, however, that depending on what path the player character chooses, when Visas looks upon the Sith Lord, she says she sees "Just a man, nothing more."

Like most of the Sith Lords, Darth Nihilus's name has some meaning (nihil is Latin for nothing). He has no loyalties to anyone but himself, and will consume both Sith and Jedi with his hunger, which notes that his name fits his current personality quite well.

It should be noted that Nihilus never speaks a clear word in the game, he simply emits patterns of sounds. Though what Nihilus is saying is never revealed, it seems Visas can understand him and talk to him in Basic. Nihilus's pattern of speech is similar to the sounds that the Sith Holocrons made in the library on Telos, though whether this is intentional or not is not revealed. It is possible that both speech patterns (that of Nihilus and that of the Sith Holocrons) are dialects of the native language of the Sith species on Korriban.

Isaah

Hmmm... looking at the actual information, I believe you copy and pasted what it said. I want you to put these paragraphs in your own words, you can use references if you wish, but make sure you put quotes {{""}} around the reference.

Try to be creative, continue on with the 4th mission, but do what I requested, use your own words, any further use of copying what the site says will result in restarting your training.

Lord Legacy · sith facts

well for one thing i did not know that the history of the sith went back so far. I did not know that there were wars held between the sith and jedi far before the star wars saga began. I also did not know that so many of sith are just fallen jedi who somehow got tempted like anakin, i thought more would of been born bad. I also did not know that some Sith lords were so merciless and their quest for power. Like Darth Nihilus it the bio i read of him it said "His lust for power consumed Worlds". I also did not know that Darth Maul was such a powerful Sith before Obi-Wan killed him. Also about Darth Maul I did not know his markings were painful sith tatoos, i believe this shows his true commitment to the dark side, i think under no circumstances was he ever a good person capable of being a jedi i think he was born a Sith.

Lord Legacy · what i want to be

well master i have thought it over and i am a warrior at heart. i would like to become a sith marauder and be out there taking what i can and killing anything that gets in my way and truly let the dark side flow through me so i can become more powerful then i ever dreamed of. So this is what i would like to do after i work my way to the rank of master.

Lord Legacy · sith master

this is mission 3 but i will do it agian. I think Darth Nihilus to be the most powerful of all Sith Lords. I feel this because it is said is lust for power cosumed worlds, that he sucked the force energy out of living things and living planets so that he could stay alive. he did not speak he was just pure evil and had no remorse and lived the true way of the Sith Lord

Lord Scourge

Excuse me folks, but there are a couple of problems here:

1. Blight never answered my question, where I was asking about his apprentice who was not following their training, before he could take on a second apprentice.

2. I have yet to see roleplaying in here. All I see is Blight asking questions and darkmind doing a quick web search for answers.

darkmind, I'm sorry that you are in this situation, but Blight has not yet satisfied the questions I posed before having him take a second apprentice. Instead of answering, he created this thread for you, in this roleplay section, but with the exception of the first two posts being in a prose writing style, none of this has been roleplaying.

A learning session such as this could be a mission (not five), but not without the context of roleplaying. How are you finding this information, in character? Are you going to the holocron room to ask questions of ancient Sith Lords? Are you speaking with Masters and asking them questions? What's going on here, besides a bunch of googling?

-Scourge

Lord Legacy · roleplay

im sorry lord scourge i did not know that everything had to be in roleplay i will do better i apologize for this transgression

Isaah

Lord Scourge, I may be of lower and insuperior rank, but I would like it if you did not interfere with this or any training that goes on in this particular thread. I placed this in this area to begin with missions, and have them slowly escalade into roleplaying when I feel the apprentice is prepared for such action. If this is a problem, feel free to continue this conversation over PM, I do not want anything in this thread to go off topic.

((My former apprentice is not nearly active enough, and at the beginning of her training, I informed her that I will not wait for her if she fails to check in here, and she would stop here in intervals of 4-5 days.))

<<Very Good Darkmind. I suppose we shall cut the missions short and begin roleplaying to please the masses.>>

* Blight pulled his dark robes off from his body and reached for his saber, he ignited it, and held it firmly.

"You begin the duel, show me what you already know... and I shall show you so much more."

* Blight stood eagerly as he spun his saber, he grinned and laughed as his arms hung heavily, waiting for the assault.

Lord Legacy · duel

*The young apprentice used the force to fetch his lightsaber and ignited it, the crimson blade gave his face an eery glow, and he spun his weapon and then with blazing speed attacked his master.

Lord Legacy · duel

*The apprentice gave a hard blow down but his master parried it with ease and threw him back. The young apprentice got up and gave a blur of attacks all easily parried by the master.

Isaah

((Try not to double post, make sure you emphasize what you are doing. You are using actions well, remember to sperate the sentences, if what you're doing is a very long paragraph, break it apart to make it easy to understand.))

*Blight merely spun sideways to avoid the confrontation, he leaped forward with a powerful downward slash. The slash was just barely avoided by the apprentice, but then Blight swung again, this time sending the training saber through Darkmind's right shoulder.

"Very good, but always keep your guard up."

((Try to have correct grammar, and make your post simple to understand, that's all that matters. Get to the point, tell them exactly what you do, when you do it.))

Darth Reaper

Mind if I watch?

Isaah

((Please do, feel free to critique on how my apprentice handles himself. Later, if he wishes, he can duel you to obtain a feeling for other ways of combat.))

* Blight spun inwards with a lethal strike. Darkmind narrowly avoids the thrust and sends his blade towards Blight's knee. Blight grins, then quickly grabs, and ignites his second saber. Blight stops the attack and lands on his feet, he pushes forward as they become saber-locked.

"Be prepared for anything, at any time. Always set high standards, you may become the greatest Sith there has ever been. But to do this... there are great consequences, you must sacrafice to recieve."

Darth Reaper

Alright I'll crituqe or whatever and duel your apprentice if they want.

Lord Legacy · duel

the apprentice is taked aback from the masters skill with his lightsaber. He does a back flip trying to land blows the whole time while he is in the air. The master paries them all. The apprentice lands whirls his lightsaber and frustration and goes into a series of attacks and jabs and slashes. His master laughs at his young apprentices futile attempts to attack him. Then a look of anger comes over the masters face. The Sith Master begins his unrelenting assault. The apprentice parries the first few, then has to duck under the next slash. The master jabs at the apprentice, the apprentice parries the blow to the side and makes a strike at the master. The master barely gets his lightsaber up to block the blow. The Master says" Good my young apprentice let the hate and frustration fuel your power!" But then the master begins a series of counter attacks and breaks the apprentices defense and beats him into submission.

Isaah

((That was good, but you have to break up the sentences like I do, it saves time and frustration for everyone. When someone talks, make it into it's own sentence [look at my roleplaying style and that's what I mean] try making it simple to read, and easy to understand.))

* Blight charged towards Darkmind, he sent a powerful slash towards his right side, but it was easily deflected. Darkmind countered with a quick swing, but Blight narrowly blocked the strike.

"Very Good, that is how you should be fighting, feel the power within yourself. Use it, let the darkness flow through you."

* Blight pushed Darkmind's saber away and sent a swift jab to darkmind's face, he followed with a knee to darkmind's groin, and finally a furious swing towards Darkmind's chest.

<<A lightsaber is not the only way to defeat an opponent, you can use anything around you: your fists, rocks, metallic objects, anything at all. We shall begin with the Force very soon.>>

Darth Reaper

This is an interesting fight so far.

Lord Legacy · duel

Darkmind eyes glowed with the hate that was filling him. He called upon his lightsaber again with the force and yelled with anger and rushed his master. He went on with the blur of attacks

His master suprised by his apprentices quickness parried all of the attacks but was amazed at his apprentices second wind.

Darkmind spun with an attack and it was parried and then spun again and kicked his master in the stomach and followed it with a jab in the face.

His master shook with anger and attacked and was in the process of over powering his opponet. He kicked his apprentice in the face that left him in a daze. The master raised his lightsaber far above his head for a kill shot.

Darkmind regained his senses and saw his master raise for the attack. Darkmind could only think of one thing to do. As his master brought down the strike. Darkmind turned off his lightsaber.

His Master wiffed and a look of utter suprise came over his face as he almost fell as he over postioned his weight.

Darkmind took his oppurtunity and used the force to throw a boulder at his master. This caught his master in the leg. Darkmind now began his counter attack. He could feel the hate flowing through him. His eyes showed this with a sick yellow glow. Dark mind feignted left but when right and attacked his master.

His master was suprised he said " very good my apprentice, the hate powers you like I never imagined, you show great promise" as he said this he was parrying his apprentices barrage of attacks. He did not know how long he could keep this up. His apprentice seemed to have boundless energy.

Isaah

* Blight began to show fatigue as he parried the blows swiftly. His aged and somewhat war-torn body was slowly losing charisma. Blight pulled his saber down to stop an attack, then stepped right next to Darkmind and sent his second saber through Darkmind's lightsaber-hilt. Darkmind's lightsaber shut off, and then constantly turned on and off, the strike had ruined the training saber, and Blight smiled as he stepped backwards.

"Very good job Darkmind, I'm somewhat impressed. But you use random words at times, you don't have to use sophisticated words or large words to make people feel insuperior."

*Blight tossed Darkmind his second saber and grinned, he threw his head back and laughed heartily. Blight signalled for Darkmind to attack, and crossed his arms after a moment of silence.

<<You're showing very good skill, you came here ready to become great. Keep up what you do now, and you will surpass anyone you believe you can. You need to learn how to simplify your strategy, you're using a confusing style of roleplaying, and I'm finding it to be very complicated. You don't need to use huge words, simply do as I do, in the next few posts you make, Roleplay like I do.>>

Lord Legacy · duel

darkmind eyes glowed with hate as he caught the lightsaber and ingited the red blade. He used the force to hurl a pipe at his master and then attacked.

His master parried the pipe and when he look back darkmind was in his face, weapon blurred in attacks. The masters arm got nicked my the lightsaber. the master growled with anger and parried the next blow with authority.

Darkmind was caught of guard by his masters new found energy. He slowly was being backed into a wall by his masters never ending attacks. He did not know what to do but he had to think quick.

The master saw the indecision in his young apprentices face and laughed coldly as his eyes blazed.

But then darkmind jumped up and kicked off the wall and into a flip and landed behind his master. He attacked with a quick jab and caught his master in the leg.

The masters face wrinkled in pain and he said "Good, Good, my young apprentice you have shown me much"

Isaah

(( You can refer to me as "Blight" in this roleplay))

*Blight jumped into the air and came down on Darkmind with a heavy downwards thrust, this was just narrowly avoided. Blight landed, somewhat sloppily, and sent his blade towards Darkmind's knee, it was avoided, and countered by Darkmind. Blight dove under the swing and roled inwards, leaning towards Darkmind as he stood up.

"You see, I've found the hole in your fighting style, leaving yourself open is a bad thing to do... some people pounce on your openings... others don't"

*With this said, Blight sent his saber into Darkmind's chest and jumped backwards. Darkmind fell to the floor in pain as the saber remained impaled in his chest, Blight used the force to pull the saber out very slowly from Darkmind's chest.

"Now, make sure to watch your defense... remember, the only good offense is a superior defense."

*Blight stood awkwardly as he awaited Darkmind's assault.

<<Make sure you spell everything properly before posting, preview your post, and correct any misspelled words. Other than that, you're doing fine. But you are breaking your post up alittle too much, you can keep them together like mine. Only make a new sentence if you say something (like I do) and it'll be easier to understand.>>

Lord Legacy · duel

blood dripped from darkminds wounds as he prepared his assualt. He attacked but tentively not wanting to let his guard down again. He could feel the hate building back up as the pain from his wounds coursed through him. Darkmind was being defensive just waiting for his opening.

Blight was relentless in his attacks he saw his apprentices defense go back up after his attack had left him battered and bloody. He could feel the hate building up in him. He taunted his apprentice, he said " Let the hate take you over, strike me down, I maimed you!"

Darkminds eyes darkened with hate as he attacked, the hate made him not think about his wounds only taking down his foe.

Isaah

*Blight felt the anger, the hatred... and then smiled as he stepped on Darkmind's bent knee and flipped backwards off of it. Blight flew through the air and spun. Exactly as his foot touched the ground, he threw his saber at Darkmind, the Blade went into his stomach, and sat there as he stumbled backwards in confusion and pain.

"That was a very good assault, good job, very well done. You are learning faster than I anticipated."

*Blight reached out and pulled the blade from Darkmind's stomach, he laughed at the somewhat large burn marks on his apprentice' body, then qucikly jumped backwards as Darkmind sent a furiously quick slash towards his knee.

"Haha... very good, quick thinking, and unrelentless... you will be a great sith someday... but THAT day is very far away... you must learn to push yourslef, to go against all odds simply to be better than your opponent... now attack"

<<Very Good, I am very pleased with your roleplaying, you need to push yourself to be good, strive to be the best Sith you can be... We shall begin with the force tomorrow.>>

Lord Legacy · duel

Darkmind seeming as he was just not aware of his wounds jumped to his feet and began his assault, his hate consumed him as he reigned blows down upon Blight, and jumped and flipped and landing beside his master and whipped his lightsaber looking to take Blights head off.

Blight ducked and stumbled back, suprise on his face. He thought to himself" How can he be doing this, I have maimed him twice".

Darkmind continued his attacks, he twirled his lightsaber jabbed at his master stomach and pulled back to draw his masters lightsaber down to block the jab but then brought it up and jabbed the lightsaber threw Blights shoulder.

Isaah

<<That post was too cluttered together, keep it simple, don't do so many things at once.>>

*Blight gripped his shoulder as he stepped backwards, he grinned, then disengaged is saber and threw it to the ground.

"Very Good. Now, it's time to learn the ways of the force."

*Blight lifted his hand and sent Darkmind's saber flying in one direction, and his body in another. Blight smirked as he tossed Darkmind from left to right, crashing into various walls.

"Now, you will learn through instinct, I will not tell you what to do, but rather see if you can survive on your own."

*Blight snapped his fingers and a door flung open. Behind this door stood hundreds upon thousands of droids, millions of different types stood jumbled together in ranks. They stepped forward, and pulled out their guns, ready to kill Darkmind.

<<Using no weapons, dispose of the Droids (through the force). Keep the post readable and simple, and do not kill them all instantly, make it suspenseful... it's more fun for the viewer to read.>>

Lord Legacy · droids

Darkmind raised up and looked at the droids and slowly walked to them and sent a bolt of force lightning that took many out. then he broke into a run and sent a powerful force push that sent hundreds scattered on the ground. He picked them with the force and crushed agianst the wall.

Darkmind smirked at the destruction. But his lapse in concentration cost him a blaster bolt in the arm. The hate built up in him and used the force to pick up the droid who shot him and crushed his head with force. Darkmind laughed evily as the droid crumbled to the ground.

A line of droids lined up and took aim and fired. Darkmind put up a blockade surrounding him and the blaster fire backfired into the group of droids taking them down.

Isaah

"Hmmmm... Perhaps too easy?"

*Blight again snapped his fingers and another door opened. 5 Bots entered the room, but they were all exact replicas of Blight. Blight stood lined up with the bots and they scrambled around as they flew towards Darkmind. The voices echoed as each bot flew past Darkmind.

"Now you must defeat everything, but these are no simple droids, these are highly trained, very powerful and almost indestructable Bots."

*Each Bot (including Blight) ignited a saber and charged at Darkmind, one after another, they sent there crimson blades through Darkmind, occassionally stopping to let him breathe.

"Open yourself up to the darkness, feel its presence, fight back... but you cannot use your saber."

*Each bot charged at Darkmind, grinning happily as they lunged towards him...

<<Use whatever means necessary to defeat 4 of the 5 bots, No Lightsaber, only force, and this will be a difficult fight, even I would struggle in a battle such as this. Do not defeat them "simply" or "easily" they can easily kill anyone.>>

Lord Legacy · bots

Darkmind slowly backed up, sweat dripping off him, dried blood stained his clothes. He let the hate flow through him to give him strength and his eyes glowed. A small smile came across his face.

Darkmind used the force hurl a rock at one of the bots but it was parried by the saber.

Then one of bots attacked, Darkmind relying on his sharp reflexes to avoid the lightsaber, then in desperation he used the force to push back the droid to give him time to get out of the way.

Then he attacked the droid he spunhouse kicked and used to force to pick him up and toss him across the room. To the young apprentices dismay the droid got back up and reignited his saber.

Darkmind's hate was at a breaking point and he could feel the force flowing through him, he then forced the droid to come to him and used the force to drop a huge air duct on top of the droid. Disposing of that one he look at the other three and bid them to come on

Two of them came at him he used the force to push them into each other and then picked up about 6 boulders and hurled them at the droids. One of the boulders hit one of the droids in the arm and his saber dropped.

Darkmind pounced on this oppurtunity and used the force to pick him up and crash him from ceiling to floor over and over again till the droid stopped moving.

Darkmind then turned his attention the other droid. This time Darkmind didnt wait for the droid to attack he attacked and sent the droid into the wall, then the ceiling, the back to the floor. Then Darkmind with his eyes glowing a smile on his face brought down half the ceiling on the droid.

Darkmind laughed crazily at this scene as the final droid came at him, the hate consumed Darkmind and he felt so powerful. The droid came at him with slash after slash and one caught him in the leg causing him to drop to one knee in pain.

Darkmind rolled to avoid a kill shot by the droid and jumped to his feet. Darkmind used the force to create a whirlwind and this picked up the droid and it ripped him to pieces.

Darkmind collapsed from exhaustion and bloodloss as the final droid was beaten

Isaah

"Job well done. I was very impressed"

*Blight put his saber away as he walked towards Darkmind's bloodstained, wartorn body. Blight looked down and chuckled abit then pulled his apprentice up.

"We shall now begin with your mental endurance... and mixing that with how it affects your body physically."

*Blight's eyes brightened intensely, glowing a fiery red-orange. He smiled and then stepped backwards. As Darkmind stood there, somewhat dazed, Blight used the force to pry into his apprentice's mind.

><You will know pain, there is no stopping your demise. You are weak because of your beliefs, you think you are capable of being the best, but you will be dissappointed when you fail you trials.>< These words echoed through Darkmind's thoughts, he looked confused, and moved around as if the voices were painful.

<<You only require two more days of training, tomorrow will be your most grueling training, show up and finish everything, and you will finish... if I am not satisfied, you will be delayed for an extra day.>>

Lord Legacy · tommorow

yes master i am ready

Darth Reaper

On your last day of training you shall duel me to see what your capable off.

Lord Legacy · duel

i look foward to it Master Reaper

Isaah

* Blight smirked as he sent thousands of horrible images and thoughts into Darkmind's head. Each passing second was utter horror as Darkmind was plagued by millions of dying souls. Darkmind fell to the ground in pain, holding his dead as he turned from left to right.

"You're body is just as easily harmed on the inside as it is the outside... learn to cope with the pain, learn how to live with it."

*Blight's eyes turned a brighter shade of red, the images slowly getting more horrific and terrifying. Blight let out a chuckle as he began to show Darkmind his own past, the worst things possible were sent through his head as the time went by. Darkmind continuosly shreaked in pain, and occassionally spat up abit of blood.

<<Tomorrow is your last day of training with me, I believe you are ready to step forward in this empire. You will battle Darth Reaper before you may become a Warrior.>>

Lord Legacy · mind

Darkmind yelled in agony and blood ran down his mouth. Darkmind couldnt cope with the images running through his head. He looked up at his master and his smirking face and hate coursed through him.

Darkmind eyes glowed as he attempted to regain control of his thoughts. He tried to focus on the thought of killing his tormentor. It was working, he could feel strengh building in him, as he focused more on this, the hate kept builiding till his eyes were a dark orange color.

Darkmind slowly got up to one knee and then slowly stood up. The hate buring in his eyes and the blood dripping down his chin he stood up defiantly and glared at his master

Isaah

*Looking at Darkmind alittle annoyed, Blight snickered and under his breath muttered.

"It's about time... I was beginning to think it was too much for you."

*Blight lifted his left hand and pointed towards Darkmind, instantly, thousands of Volts of Sith lightening went surging through Darkmind's chest. Blight laughed as he raised his other hand and sent more Lightening towards Darkmind's head.

"Now you shall learn true pain, without pain, we do not succeed. You must use it."

*Darkmind fell to the ground as his body slowly began to burn. Blood now gushed from his mouth and nose, and Blight looked down at this show.

"Fight it... get back up... Gather your power... and then you shall duel Darth Reaper."

*Blight smirked again as he sent ten times the amount of lightening hurdling at Darkmind's body. Blight eyes began to glow again as he sent more devastating images and thoughts into Darkmind's head. Darkmind was almost completely destroyed, he lay on the ground, unable to move from pain, but slowly he could begin moving fingers, then arms and legs. A dark red aura began to glow around Blight as he sent even worse thoughts into Darkmind's head, the Lightening continued to pour into Darkmind's body...

<< Your final mission will be a duel with Master Reaper. You will have to fight him after all this is over, and you will not be at 100%... >>

Lord Legacy · trainng

Darkminds face winced in pure agony but he slowly was beginning to turn the pain into hate. His eyes went from yellow to orange then finally to red. He moved his arm and then his other arm and then his legs and he slowly turned and got up to one knee.

Then he looked up at his master and put up his hand to block the lightning and some of it got through but some bounced back at his master.

Blight dodged it and laughed and sent double the amount but Darkmind was not showing signs of stopping, he continued to get up as his strenght increased. He slowly put up both hands to block the attack from his master

Isaah

*Blight watched as his apprentice slowly gained footing, and then, before Darkmind had stood up entirely, Blight rushed in at Darkmind using the Force Speed technique. Blight landed a chaotic boot to Darkmind's jaw, the impact nearly cracked the jaw in two. Blight stepped back, and wiped abit of Darkmind's blood off of his tunic.

"Now, tell me what you wish to do... shall we continue with your endurance? or shall we duel now, so you can duel Master Reaper for your final mission?"

*Blight stood completely upright, he had his hands behind his back, and looked very formal as he took another step backwards. A grin now took over his face completely, and he snickered as he pulled his saber off his belt and sent the fallen saber next to Darkmind's crippled, bloody body.

"You chose, before I do it for you... I am impressed with your will to live, but you don't quite have the capability to use that anger in a positive way... I will remain on the Defensive, try to strike me down."

*Blight motioned with his hand.

Lord Legacy · duel

Darkmind picked his body off the floor and used to force to call the lightsaber and ignited it. He attacked in a fury of rage and slashed and jabbed at his master.

Blight blocked all of them and then he had to duck under one.

Darkmind twirled his saber in frustration and continued his assault. He went right and slashed at his master and and then parried a blow from blight and then brought a jab ment for his master stomach.

Isaah

*Blight quickly avoided the Jab by using Force Speed. Blight side-stepped Darkmind's next swing and sent his blade through Darkmind's leg. Blight lunged forward and impaled the blade into Darkmind's neck, then pulled it out, spun around, and sent the blade into Darkmind's side.

"You're letting your guard down, plus you're attacking far too fast for a person that just went through all that torture... your body can't keep up with your mind."

*Blight pulled his saber out of Darkmind's side and pushed off Darkmind's knee, he flew through the air and landed about 20 feet away. Blight again signalled for Darkmind to attack.

<<You have to make everything realistic, if you just went through horrible torture... you're gonna be screwed up alittle bit, in your case, you should be completely screwed up, almost unable to move. Learn how to use the force, as well as a Lightsaber. The force is greater than any weapon you can imagine, nothing comes close to it's power.>>

Darth Reaper

"I'll enjoy fighting your apprentice when he's ready."

Am I supposed to kill him?

Isaah

((No... but you can seriously injure him... do not kill him, he is already totally wasted... I doubt he'd be able to do anything after I'm done with him... actually, you can start the duel now... make it last))

*Blight stepped away and disengaged his lightsaber, he threw it at the knees of Darkmind, who was barely able to move after the onslaught he was just subjected to.

"Now fight, this time, with everything you can, prove you're worth something..."

<<This will be your last mission, tomorrow is your last day as an apprentice.>>

Darth Reaper

"Muwahahaha." I'm ready to fight Darkmind. You can attack first."

Lord Legacy · duel

Darkmind spit up blood, he eyes filled with hate but he was very week. He called the lightsaber with the force and tried to stand up but fell to one knee. He winced but forced himself to stand up and ignited the lightsaber.
He used the force to throw a boulder at his opponet and then limped to him and attacked.

He threw down a blow and used force push to throw his opponet back and jab at him. It barrely missed then he threw another boulder at him and then picked him up and threw him into a wall.

Darkmind eyes rolled back into his head he didnt know if he could keep this up.

Darth Reaper

"Hmm this is too easy." Darth Reaper hits Darkmind with force lightning. Darkmind falls over barely alive and he utters, "I give up."

Lord Legacy · duel

But then Darkmind shakes his head and stands up barely and looks at his opponet with hatred. He uses the force to try to choke reaper and then Darkmind throws his lightsaber at his opponet going through his opponets leg.

Reaper yowls in pain and Darkmind calls back his lightsaber. Then Darkmind calls upon the force and drops half of the ceiling on Reaper.

Darth Reaper

Darth Reaper then shoots his lightsaber through Darkminds jugular vien and darkmind dies slowly.

Isaah

Darth Reaper

Yeah I know but he made me mad cuz he cheated a bit.

Isaah

I saw no such cheating. I didn't expect to see anything like that... He did not cheat, but was simply fighting back by sending a saber into your leg... which was doing alot seeing as he was in the condition he was...

Very good Darkmind, I was impressed with your prowess.

Darth Reaper

Whatever.

Isaah

*cough* please don't make me any more angry than I already am Master Reaper. I find it a very disrespectful insult when people say "whatever" and when I here that said to me... I truely fight as hard as I can to not cuss them out completely... Nobody here could comprehend how disrespectful I think that is, and I would like it if you showed alittle more respect.

Darth Reaper

Ok I'm sorry I said "whatever". But he needs to be a little more realistic in his fighting. I mean he's almost dead and he still maganges to throw a saber and hit my leg. And try to force choke me and drop half a friggin' ceiling on me and you don't call that cheating?!?!

Isaah

No, it may seem unfair to you, but it is possible... not everyon loses instantly...some people require a great means of pain to stop them... Force choke requires virtually no energy... you're simply constraining the enemy's throat. And dropping a ceiling is nothing more than putting a great amount of weight on, or pulling the ceiling down. Anybody could throw a saber... that's simply a flick of a wrist.

As I said, this is in no way "unfair" or "cheating" it's ingenuity, creativity, and will power. Perhaps I will show you what I mean later (In a duel... me vs. you) but *asking an Admin/Mod* I would like these last few posts deleted please... delete everything after my post

"Darth Reaper wrote:
Darth Reaper then shoots his lightsaber through Darkminds jugular vien and darkmind dies slowly.

That's void, because these are training sabers, and he cannot die... as I instructed beforehand.

"Very good Darkmind, you are finished with your training, I shall make a knighting thread for you, where you shall be tried as a Sith Warrior." "
Thank you.

Lord Legacy · training

Thank You Master I have learned much when do i get my Darth title

Isaah

Once you are put through the trials, you can look around in the promotions area to get an idea of what they do, but each one is different.

Lord Legacy · trials

what do i have to do within the trials master

Emperor Shadow

(Ah, sorry. I accidentally deleted the post in which Avic said he is here.)

Embeion

im here ,lol

Isaah

Very good.

Qel'Vos turned to his new apprentice with a snicker, he wielded two, Fiery Gold, curve-hilted sabers. Avic stumbled backwards, slightly intimidated, but then gained his footing again and reached for his own saber.

<< Your missions will consist of some difficult, and intimidating questions, and may require very long responses. You will have many missions, I am not guarenteeing any particular number:

1. Which position do you wish to fill, after your training? -Warrior- or -Acolyte-

2. Once you finish all forms of training, and become a Sith Master, which order do you intend on joining, and why? (be in-depth with your reasoning)

3. Visit Wikipedia.com and find a Form of Lightsaber combat inwhich you wish to train. This will help me with your roleplaying training, so I can adjust to train you to the fullest.

Grammar and understanding is key to roleplaying. You must learn how to elegantly roll together proper grammar, with what you wish to say. Be precise, and keep to the point, as to keep the realism of Lightsaber combat along it's normal path. Our first goal will be to insure proper grammar, and proper combat-style. >>

Begin combat. Answer your missions in parenthesis or other means of seperation.

Embeion

Avic ignited his crimson red saber that Darth chick had given him before he had stepped down and stepped forward and motioned for his new master to make the first attack.( ill go look up osme up the stuff and then return with an answer, But would Acolyte because it is something diffrent then wat most people do. Now i have to find the diffrent oders.)

Embeion

( Ive looked up the Empress Hands. I would like to make sure the Empress is safe and will live. I want to make sure the empire will continue through the ages and we need the Empress to do this, if she was to die the sith empire would go into meltdown.I want to make sure she lives a long and fulled life for the sith. i would like to advance in the Form IV: Ataru. I would like to attack with speed and accuarcy.

Darth Acheron

If you did want to be a Hand, you woul;d have to wait a while. Evberyone waiting to join the Hands are waiting on Zero's return from his pro-longed absence.

Isaah

<<Very Good. I will begin dueling in a way that capitalizes on you using Ataru. When answering your mission questions, seperate them by numbers (ie. #1, #2, #3 and so forth) and answer with proper grammar, make sure from now on, you use correct wording and make no typing mistakes. If you begin roleplaying, and your post turns out to be atad too long, break apart the paragraph into sections.

Ataru is meant to be fast, powerful, and elegant. The user taps into the Force to use almost every move, and this is a style towards a more aggressive path.

4. Read about 3 different wars in the Sith History on wikipedia.com and give a detailed explaination about how they could have ended differently (assuming the wars you choose will be losses of the Sith Empire)

5. View through the Hall of Dark Patronage and find a Dark Patron you find most suitable for yourself, then post saying you wish for that particular person to be your Dark Patron.

6. Work on a ship, customize it so it's one only you possess. Find pictures from anywhere, and post them up here, make it creative and come up with a name. Be original, and make sure you find one you like. This ship must be somewhat small, and this ship will now be yours for profiles, missions, roleplays, etc.>>

Qel'Vos lunged forward, he sent his training saber towards Avic's hip, Avic dove aside and avoided the thrust, he countered with a quick, and powerful downward strike. Qel'Vos rotated his body as he sent his legs into the air and managed to somersault away from the strike. Qel'Vos laughed at this and stepped back.

"We will emphasize on your aggressiveness, and teach you how to truely tap into the force to understand your combat style."

Embeion

Avic lunged at his Master and jumped stopped afoot away to spiral in the air and land behind his Master. He tried a swept to knock him done but failed when Prophet Qel'Vos jumped away.Avic tought he should be faster since he is the younger one , this grew him angry and disadified with himself. Once again he lunged forward but instead of sweeping he surprised Qel'vos with a quick one ,two slash with his saber. Avic was much more proud of himself now that he saw Qel'vos had to retreat a foot or two back to avoid the second slash.

(Ok I will start right away on the assignments)

Isaah

Make sure you use proper wording: "Avic lunged at his Master and jumped[add comma here] stopped afoot away[comma here] to spiral in the air and land behind his Master[change to something making atad more sense: then spun in the air, and landed behind his Master]"

Good job though, you're getting there. Finish your current missions, and we will continue with them.

Qel'Vos was slightly surprised, and stumbled bakcwards to avoid the second attack. Qel'Vos waited until Avic's blade fell, then lunged forward and sent a powerful strike through Avic's leg, slightly burning it, and sending a sensation through the limb. Qel'Vos backed away to let Avic back to his feet.

"Continue."

Embeion

" Yes Master"

Avic stood silently , he was waiting for Qel'vos to attack. Again Qel'vos knew this and saw the pattran Avic was useing.

(Sorry, as you already guessed im not a great english class student,lol.
4.
The Great Sith war toke place 4000 years before Darth Maul and Lord Sidous attacked Naboo with the trade fed.When Ulic was captured from the betrayal lead to a downfall of the war.The could have made a succesful storm on the city if Aleema did not call the retreat.After other attacks and Kun freeing his apprentice , Ulic counfronted hsi brother and slayyed him, this lead to the sith hold of the dark side on him released. Later he was stripped of the force.The republic lead an attack on Kun's temple,Kun was wise enough to know he would not survive the attack so he fused himself with the temple.If the betrayal of his apprentice hadnt took place the war would have allmost certain turned out to a victory. If kun stayed andattacked the republic force that came to destroy him, he might have had a chance or he could have retreated to another part of the planet and form an counter-attack.If one of these was to happen the Great sith war would have been a victory by a greater chance.

In the Sith/Imperail war agaisnt the jedi/rebellion took place after teh events of the destruction of the jedi council.ONly two jedi remained, Obi-wan kenobi, and Luke skywalker (Darth Vaders son). If Luke had not found Obi-won , he would have not been trained so the abbsence of him would make a great deal diffrence as Luke was the one to lead to the down fall of Lord Vader. So if LUke had never found Obi-won , the imperail forces would have 100% surely beating the rebellion.When Lord Vader let go of the darkside he betrayed the Lord of the sith (Palpatine) and threw him into wat looked like an aybiss. If Lord Vader would have let the Emporer kill Luke it would have been the istinction of the jedi for good.But since Lord Vader had never truely been lost to the light , it sufferd a great blow to the sith makeing the few left scatter across the galaxy in hidding. But if Lord vader had not betrayed his Master the sith would be the dominent side of the force for eturnity.

The Mandorlorain wars was a war agaisnt the republic, obvisouly the Mandorlorians was the other side. The jedi had seen no point into joining the war, at the time. But there was jedi who saw other wise and disobeyed the council and went on to fight witht he republic, most of these jedi fell to the darkside of the force during the long, tireing fights. UNder the role of Darth Revan the sith empire grew until it over powerd the jedi like many times before in the history of starwars. Yet again they have lost of betrayal. Darth Revans apprentive Lord Malak betrayed REvan as the jedi lead an attack on his masters ship. Malak toke advantage of this andfired apon his Masters ship killing them and the jedi aboard, but it didnt kill Revan and Bastila. Over time the jedi council reconstructed Revans mind and used him as a puppet for the republic. If Lord Malak had not betrayed Darth Revan the sith and there fleet would have conquered Curasuant. Over time while REvan gets new clues as to his idenity ,when Malak confronts him he is finally tolled that he was the formur Dark lord of the sith. Haven know this Revan knew his ability and that he could push forward his training. This lead to Malaks downfall, he under estimated his Master. Malak could have destroyed Revan when he first confronted him, but in not doing this they have lost the war, other wise i think they would have won if he did kill Revan.

5.
I have chosen Exar Kun as my Dark Patron.

6.

I have found this ship on my journy on Tatooine. I stumbled into a old battleground of the Empire wars agaisnt the Rebellion in my search of holocrons.I salvaged the ship and rebuilt wat was dmged , i kept its orginally lasers and battle connon as i saw they were in allmsot a perfect condidtion they only needed a few twiks. The Lasers are V.5 sunmodel. Thes lasers are repeated blasters that can fire up to 20 shots per second. They are not particulary strong but get the job done.The battle connon is unknown origin to me but is powerful and can take down a ship 3x its size if shot in the right place.THis ships crew is only one person but can fit a second. It systems are advanced and has radar, comlinks, and everything a ship needs to comunicate and be aware of the sorroundings. Its one of hte few ships of its size to have a hyperspace system installed into its core. I have had to to to varys of planets to get a custom engine which can outrun any smuggler ship known to man. It toke me two years of searching and engineering to finally get this ship flying.Its shields are basic , there strongest in the back and weakest in the front as any ship will rarely be infront of me. This ships name is Deliverince.)

((I have prob. made alot of mistakes in my grammer and spelling there.I usally dont do that much typeing in 15mins.))

Isaah

((All is well, take yoru time. Remember, quality over quantity. You're doing well for yourself.))

Qel'Vos laughed heartily, he stepped backwards into the darkness. Avic was confused, he looked at the area his master dissappeared in, then saw a bright red light come to life. This light made a clicking noise, and a large door opened, revealing three, fully-functional clones of Qel'Vos (they are in no means less powerful, or weaker than I) and they charged at Avic whilst igniting there golden sabers.

"Not every fight is won through strength. Learn to use wit to outsmart these clones, I warn you know, they are all equally intelligent, strong, and learned in the ways of the Force as I."

<<Defeat these clones, but outwit them, use intelligence to defeat them... if you can.

7. Look up the Jedi Quinlan Vos from any means needed (wikipedia preferred) and discuss flaws you found in his strategies.

8. Via wikipedia.com, research the entire History of the Sith. Give a detailed paragraph on 5 different topics (within the Sith History) and choose topics which changed the Empire for better or worse.

I expect these to take some time, so I will only give two for now. Mission 10 will be forming ideas for a new lightsaber(s) that you choose.>>

Embeion

Avic remember part of his training from Darth Chick. Then Avic swept the clone to the left makeing him colide with the middle one. But as Avic came to his fight he used the force to pull the right clone into the middle also. Having both clones clonk on the middle one, the middle one pasted out. Avic knew it would only be for about a minute or two so he had to start makeing tracks.

(7.
Vos used many forms from 3,5, and atura. HIs downfall was in his last moments he didnt think everything through. Instead of useing the force to kill the captian and surive to keep fighting, he used ataru and jumped out only to forget that they had blasters. He was shot in the stomach but still had enough time to kill the clone captain.

8.
There have been many conflicts within the sith empire. One of the greatest was when Exar Kun created the duoble-sided lightsaber(as seen in ep1.). Another part that changed the sith for the worse is when Lord Malak tried killing his master Darth Revan, if he had not fired apon his masters ship under the command of Revan the sith would have surely won the war. Also on mustafar if Darth Vader wasnt power hungry he would of not sufferd the great blow that nearly toke his life. Other wise he wouldnt be in a suit , if so he would have been more mobile and a better fighter. It would have also made the sith stronger in many ways. When Vader betrayed LordSidious began the destruction of the sith. THere is much more history of the sith that we still have yet to decover.)

Isaah

(( 9. Explain in-depth why you wish to join the order that you do. Give atleast 3-4 paragraphs on your opinions and thoughts about that order.

10. Come up with ideas and images of a new lightsaber you wish to create. This new saber can be single-sabered, double-bladed, or you can have two sabers. Be creative, decide on a color, hilt-style, etc. Give a detailed explaination and I shall help you create it, provide images if you can.))

Qel'Vos sat patiently as his apprentice battled the clones, he smirked as Avic used the force against them, even if the tactics were abit primative. He clicked another button on his belt and another door opened, from this door came 7 more clones.

"Continue as you were... and Good Luck."

(I do not expect this to be easy, make it realistic. 10 vs. 1)

Embeion

((9.

I would like to join the Empress hands. I would like to join this for the honor. For the glory for the Empress. I wish to keep the sith empire alive and breathing, I must do this by giving mylife for the empress if needed. For she gives moral, strenght, wisdom, power, knowledge to the sith.
It would also to be an honor to serve the empress directly and be in her presence. I wouldnt want to fail like the past hands of the past dark lords, like Mara Jade. The job would also keep my skills intact and not deminiss until my death. I would beable to kill any silm that comes near and tris to assassin the Empress.Plus I would open to her teachings.Im sorry my master i cannnot think of anymore.

10.Once my sister gives me back the camera I can upload a picture that I drew for the saber.

Oh and to my absence ....... The Overkill of the century

rather not discuss))

Isaah

Very Good. Due to your long absence, I chose another apprentice, but, I feel it only fair that I finish your training. I do believe you had training before I took you as an apprentice, and before your absence, you trained for four days. With those missions done, I will count it as five. So, I believe you are ready to be knighted.

Embeion

Thank you my Master

Isaah

Now, Raven, we shall begin your training as soon as you post you're ready. We shall first begin with Lightsaber Combat, then we shall move on to Force Techniques.

Jedi Sage Blaine

Ready, my master. Will I have a certain enemy to battle, such as Darkminds had?

Isaah

No, I change my strategy with each apprentice.

Qel'Vos quickly dropped his robes to the floor and plucked both sabers from his belt, they let loose a ruby-red blade, and sent a quick hiss into the room. Qel'Vos instantly lunged forward, sending his left hand inward towards Raven.

Jedi Sage Blaine

Raven felt a slight sting on his arm. He had to retreat quick. Raven backed off,but not turning his back on his master. He dropped his silken white robes, streching his elastic-like belt, and withdrew his newly constructed saber. His saber went snap-hiss as the red blade extended.

Now is my time Raven thought.

Isaah

Qel'Vos stepped in again. Leading with his right foot, he sent his right saber inwards towards Raven's hip.

Jedi Sage Blaine

Raven parried the blow, spinning his master's saber, and throwing him a little off balance. Then Raven took the offensive. He rushed his master, went for a blow to the knee, but feinted and brought his saber to his master's right shoulder, striking him with direct contact.

Isaah

Rolling to the left, Qel'Vos disengaged one saber and placed it on his belt. Stepping back in, Qel'Vos ducked another lunge by Raven and grabbed his wrist. With a quick and furious spin, Qel'Vos had tossed Raven to the floor.

"Quickness is key. Never sacrifice quickness for power, it shall be your downfall."

Qel'Vos stepped back several feet and bowed.

"Very good. Now, don't hold back. Attack me."

Jedi Sage Blaine

Raven swapped his saber to his left hand and ran at his opponent. He stepped in to the right. Qel'Vos got ready to parry a blow from the right, but Raven quickly spun his body to the left. Raven's red saber flashed across his master's knees. Qel'Vos sunk to the floor, but stood back up instantly.

Isaah

Qel'Vos rolled inward and landed a weak punch onto Raven's chin. Qel'Vos jumped up and reached for his second saber. Gripping it firmly, he ignited the blade and lunged downwards towards Raven.

Jedi Sage Blaine

"Why throw so many cheapshots?", said Raven as he parried the blow Qel'Vos sent him. Raven then stepped behind him and launched a kick into his spine.

Isaah

Qel'Vos flipped around Raven's leg as he brought it upwards. Landing quickly, he smiled.

"It is not a cheapshot. A lightsaber is not your only weapon, and if you do not understand that, then you will surely die."

Qel'Vos ferociously pushed Raven into the nearby wall. Raven managed to lift his body from the impression left by his body, and stood up once more. Qel'Vos focused on Raven, he smirked as he lifted his hand, sending streams of lghtning towards Raven.

Jedi Sage Blaine

Raven cast his right hand outward and deflected the bolts of lightning up into the rafters of the building. "Shocking that you'd say so. I knew my lightsaber is not my only weapon," Raven said as he quickly used the Force to draw one of his blasters and set it to stun while almost instantaneously blasting Qel'Vos on the chest. "I only wanted to fight with prestige since this is my trial," Raven said with a hint of bravado as he slightly nudged his master's limp body with his foot down a small flight of stairs.

Isaah

Jedi Sage Blaine

((I'm tired of all this nonsense. If I don't make it to the next rank so what? No, Yoda wasn't the only one. If you haven't read the ROTJ book then I'll tell you. Luke deflected Palpatine's first wave of force lightning. So I believe that any attack that is force generated can be force deflected. What is with you? Why am I being so strenously tested? You didn't do this to any other apprentice. Is it because you think I'm still a Jedi?))

Isaah

((Well... that was unnecessary. Considering it was Luke, that's pretty much obvious he can do it. There's a point when you wield enough power to do something along those lines, you, however are nowhere near that powerful. I am testing you in this way partially because I believe you should train alittle more than others because you were a Jedi, and there's the fact that I train my students in different ways. Reading past student's training and then expecting it to be similar is just foolish, I have changed since then, and that means I have new standards.

More strenuous training means that you will be better (more powerful, wiser, etc.) than the other students who have regular training. If you have a problem with my training methods, then simply say you quit. Admit that you can't stand up to a challenge, and you don't deserve to be a Sith. I push people to do things, to help them become better than they already are. If you can't put up with it, I've obviously been wasting my time.))

If you're going to continue your training, then reply. But that was not something I'd expect from an apprentice. The next time you do something so foolishly, I will not be so kind.

Jedi Sage Blaine

(( I understand now, but there is one more thing. I modeled my character after an already existing superhero. Please read the following link and rule if I could use these moves instead of the Force.))

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Raven_%28comics%29

Raven let the saber hit him. It couldn't hurt him anyway, since it was only a training saber. As beat up as he was, Raven stood and looked his master directly in the eyes. "You believe in me.....when noone else does," said Raven as he adjusted the intensity on his blade. It began to glow white hot. " I really don't want to hurt you..... but if I must....... I shall," Raven sprinted and his saber clashed with his master's in a way that made their faces glow hideously. Their sabers broke formation. Raven rolled to the right as Qel'Vos' sabers slashed horizantally. Raven came from behind and slashed vertically down his master's spine. The shock extended up his spine attacking his central nervous system and brain. Qel'Vos looked dazed for a moment. Raven allowed him to recover. He couldn't outright obliterate his master. They shared a special bond as teacher and student. Raven knew he was a Sith, but he couldn't be that evil.

Isaah

Laughing bitterly, Qel'Vos smiled as these thoughts ran through Raven's head. He snickered as they began to soften Raven's defense, so Qel'Vos took the chance, he lunged forward furiously. Qel'Vos landed a slight stroke through Raven's knee, which buckled and fell limp.

"That is an emotion you must learn to control. Do not let thoughts like that run through your mind."

((And, I am not quite sure. I highly doubt it, because it would be completely out of any Star Wars archives.))

Jedi Sage Blaine

Raven fell and swooned with pain. Not even the death of his parents had hurt this bad. He bled from several wounds given to him by his master. He thought to heal himself so he could take even more beatings. A purple beam ran from his master's chest to his own. "Just a week is all," said Raven as he drained the life from his master. Raven's wounds healed and he stood waiting for the next attack.

Isaah

Qel'Vos charged forward, slightly stumbling as he did. He lashed forward with a swift horizontal strike, which was parried by Raven. This turned into a saber-lock. Raven and Qel'Vos stood firmly, both using all their effort to push the other's saber back.

Jedi Sage Blaine

Rage built as the two pushed. The sabers spun as Raven disengaged the lock. Raven's saber plummeted into the ground and the result was an explosion that sent Qel'Vos and Raven flying to opposite sides of the room.

Isaah

Qel'Vos rotated his body, and as a result, landed elegantly on his feet near the wall. Raven, on the other hand, crashed into the wall and tumbled to the cold, metallic floor.

"Interesting, it seems you have done alittle more training on your own time. That was a dulled-down version of "Vader's Wrath". I am very pleased."

Qel'Vos began walking forward, he paused about twenty feet from Raven as he pulled himself to his feet. Laughing sharply, Qel'Vos flicked his wrist, and a large door opened quickly. Out walked several men. Each with no weapons, nor armor.

"Now we begin your Force training. I want you to use this first man to attempt the Torture by Chagrin technique. Focus your thoughts, enter his mind, find all of his worst experiences and re-run them through his concious mind."

Jedi Sage Blaine

Raven began to levitate as he wrapped himself in leaves of the darkside, shutting out all other objects except himself and his target. "Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos....", cooed Raven as his victim's memories washed through his conscious mind. The man's most painful blunder was letting his affair with a prostitute on Coruscant reach his wife's ears. He had lost all his wealth, power, and respect. Most of all, he had lost his children and the woman he loved. Raven ran these thoughts through his mind, until orange blisters appeared on his skin. Next, he began to develop purple welts on his cheeks. The man fell to the floor and curled up in a ball. "I'll do anything, just please stop," the man said. "What was your occupation before this event?" said Raven accusingly." I was a comm officer on a Tartan Patrol Cruiser," the man whimpered. "I think you'll serve me well," Raven said with pride. Raven settled on the ground and reality came back to vision.

Isaah

((Mmm... I don't think you should use those powers quite yet. This is a Star Wars forum, so I believe to remain in-character, you need to use Star Wars-related powers, weapons, etc. And perhaps you should work on a new "model" for your character, as I cannot allow you to advance to the next rank if you do not follow the proper conduct.))

Qel'Vos laughed impatiently. He stepped forward and lifted his arm. A fiery-red glow began to glisten about his hand; likewise with the man's body. The man's eyes began to spiral in their sockets as horrifying images flashed through his head. Dying men, blood, gore, screaming, it all echoed through his head. A loud shriek filled the air as he cradled himself on the floor, and died.

"You cannot spare an enemy. There will always be a chance they will destroy you when your guard is down. Now..."

Qel'Vos turned his arm so his hand pointed at another man. The man levitated momentarily, then moved several feet to the right.

"...We shall begin using "The Spear of Midnight Black" technique. Again, focus your thoughts. Visualize the force taking shape in your hand. Create a weapon to strike down your foe."

((I do not expect this to go so easily as you made it seem before. This is a very, very hard task to accomplish, so I believe it should be atad difficult for beginners.))

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