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Discussion of: The Life of Empress Saber - SPOILER WARNING

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 4:30 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! Feel free to comment, question, praise or condemn here. Warning: Reading this thread will involve major spoilers. _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude. Last edited by Emperor Shadow on Sat Jul 15, 2006 2:20 pm; edited 2 times in total

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 4:35 pm
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Darth Vortax Sith Warrior Joined: 14 Apr 2006 Posts: 276 Sorry about the post in the fan fiction, I must've been reading when this thread was made, though I'll say the same thing, bended should be bent and it's really good. Keep going with it.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 4:43 pm
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High Commander Vexen Sith Lord Second Degree Joined: 10 Mar 2006 Posts: 5107 Location: Building a Communist fighting robot love it keep making them often _________________

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 4:45 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! Thank you both! I've changed the word, thanks for the catch. I'm really glad you are enjoying it, I'm currently writing the second chapter. I'm in a creative mood. In the next chapter (which I'm currently tweaking for release) I address Saber as Supreme Prophetess. She was widely known as Supreme Prophet, which I always felt was untrue to her gender, so in my story, I get to exercise control over that. _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 5:28 pm
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Darth Reaper Dark Adept Joined: 11 Jan 2006 Posts: 2393 Location: Hiding from the Palace Gaurds. Any masters in the story or just high ranking people? Good story though. I'm thinking Darth Dude was banned right? _________________ の収穫者 Reaper I hate Alpha Hobos. Blessed is the mind too small for doubt. -Darth Reaper Battles Fought- Yavin Prime and Zhar. "Repent for tomorrow you die."

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 5:41 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! I am bringing in several Masters as the story progresses. I have it outlined for twenty-six chapters. I just posted Chapter Two and am certain that more Masters will be present in what I have planned for Chapters 3-6. You know, I'm actually unsure about Dude. But Minious's History of our Order tells us that Darth Dude invades Kroprulu and is the reason Chick abdicated her throne. So I'm using that. Chapter Two posted, not much happens, but it's critical. _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 5:51 pm
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Lady Ducki Honored Elder Joined: 30 Nov 2005 Posts: 8921 Location: Dunno Quote: “And it could forever set on Chick.” Awwwwwww I thought the planet's name was spelled Koprulu _________________ You wouldn't say Chineses Join the Realist Party You can't repel appeal of our magnitude!

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 5:53 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! Mooahaha. I love using lines like that. 'Tis random. Nope, according to the Timeline, it's Kroprulu. _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 5:54 pm
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Lady Ducki Honored Elder Joined: 30 Nov 2005 Posts: 8921 Location: Dunno Sorry,I'm stupid _________________ You wouldn't say Chineses Join the Realist Party You can't repel appeal of our magnitude!

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 5:56 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! No worries, you should have seen me trying to type it the first couple of times, I wound up with Croprlu, Kroplu, Kropppsurugdjkbgfiuewgdfkebgfiukgf and Moo. _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 5:59 pm
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Lady Ducki Honored Elder Joined: 30 Nov 2005 Posts: 8921 Location: Dunno How in the world did you get that third one? _________________ You wouldn't say Chineses Join the Realist Party You can't repel appeal of our magnitude!

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:01 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! Frustration does amazing things. I'm thinking about writing the third chapter tonight and not posting it until tomorrow. Hmm. What to do? _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:03 pm
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Lady Ducki Honored Elder Joined: 30 Nov 2005 Posts: 8921 Location: Dunno Quote: Frustration does amazing things. LOL! I think you should post the third chapter tonight. _________________ You wouldn't say Chineses Join the Realist Party You can't repel appeal of our magnitude!

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:04 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! Hey, when something's true, it's true. Yeah, but I'm worried about putting too much that it discourages new readers from starting it. I'll see how I feel after I finish the third chapter. _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:05 pm
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Darth Cruiciatus Sith Master Joined: 25 Jan 2006 Posts: 1337 Location: With the sheep lovers- the Welsh Shadow, the 'Jedi want you to continue. So do the Sith. It is the will of the force. Now obey, lol. _________________

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:07 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! Fine, fine. Chapter three will be up hopefully by eleven o'clock my time (EST). _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:07 pm
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Darth Cruiciatus Sith Master Joined: 25 Jan 2006 Posts: 1337 Location: With the sheep lovers- the Welsh yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's at 9 pm my time. _________________

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:10 pm
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Lady Ducki Honored Elder Joined: 30 Nov 2005 Posts: 8921 Location: Dunno And 10 my time _________________ You wouldn't say Chineses Join the Realist Party You can't repel appeal of our magnitude!

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:10 pm
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Darth Vortax Sith Warrior Joined: 14 Apr 2006 Posts: 276 Good, is Darth Dudes Empire still thriving?

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:12 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! Not that I know of. _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:21 pm
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Isaah Sith Apprentice Joined: 17 Jan 2006 Posts: 2754 Location: The Wild I like the story. And the incredible amount of detail you used is perfect. A+ work _________________ If you don't know me, you can't judge me.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:25 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! Yes, sometimes I can go a bit overboard with detail though, it's both a strength but weakness when I have a page limit. _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude.

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:33 pm
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High Commander Vexen Sith Lord Second Degree Joined: 10 Mar 2006 Posts: 5107 Location: Building a Communist fighting robot no such thing as overboard with details _________________

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 7:02 pm
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Lady Ducki Honored Elder Joined: 30 Nov 2005 Posts: 8921 Location: Dunno The new part was great. I can't until the big fight _________________ You wouldn't say Chineses Join the Realist Party You can't repel appeal of our magnitude!

Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 7:04 pm
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Emperor Shadow Sith Emperor/Admin Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 21471 Location: Behind Door Number 2! Aww, it's that obvious there's going to be a big fight? _________________ That, that is, is; that, that is not, is not. Today's Evil Overlord Mood/Thought Process of the Day: Gungan opera The Realist Party. You can't repel appeal of our magnitude.

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