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 PostPosted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 8:11 pm Reply with quote  
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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I figured that since I'm using Jarik in an RP, I could post his bio. Jarik is my main non-Force Using character, just as Marix is my main Force Using character.
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 PostPosted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 10:58 am Reply with quote  
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Edited Marix's Appearance.
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

I finally have the time and inclination to get my Biography done, especially with the timeline set now.

I would like to ask for quotes about Marix/Markaro Vos that could be used in my Biography (such as Praxeum has in his). I would like to have a quote at the beginning of each major chapter, one that defines Marix during that period in his life. I would also like to try to get a quote in every time I introduce a new character into Marix's life.

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So the first time Marix meets Shadow would have something like:

"The heir to the legacy of the Force. A true commander, and loyal servant of the Emperor. I have never met a better Sith." – Emperor Shadow (Stated after Markaro Vos completed his Military training and served valiantly at the Taking of Coruscant.)

Or at the beginning of the chapter on his Military service:

"I have never known a Sith to rise so quickly through the ranks while contributing much more than his peers did, even though they had a much larger period of time to do so in." – Dark Lord Acrimonus (Stated during his resignation address after he named Darth Marix as his successor.)

You can contribute more than one quote if you want. I'll be sure to place a segment in my Profile for "Quotes About Marix" in case I can't use your quote in the Biography.

Thanks.
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 PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:32 pm Reply with quote  
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Supreme Commander Marix wrote:
I finally have the time and inclination to get my Biography done, especially with the timeline set now.

I would like to ask for quotes about Marix/Markaro Vos that could be used in my Biography (such as Praxeum has in his). I would like to have a quote at the beginning of each major chapter, one that defines Marix during that period in his life. I would also like to try to get a quote in every time I introduce a new character into Marix's life.

Ex:
So the first time Marix meets Shadow would have something like:

"The heir to the legacy of the Force. A true commander, and loyal servant of the Emperor. I have never met a better Sith." – Emperor Shadow (Stated after Markaro Vos completed his Military training and served valiantly at the Taking of Coruscant.)

Or at the beginning of the chapter on his Military service:

"I have never known a Sith to rise so quickly through the ranks while contributing much more than his peers did, even though they had a much larger period of time to do so in." – Dark Lord Acrimonus (Stated during his resignation address after he named Darth Marix as his successor.)

You can contribute more than one quote if you want. I'll be sure to place a segment in my Profile for "Quotes About Marix" in case I can't use your quote in the Biography.

Thanks.


Updated, as I stated earlier.
- Languages
- Appearance
- Clothing
- Droids
- Biography (Not the whole thing yet. Expect a much longer Biography. Praxeum-length or close to it.)
- Affiliations
- Current Occupations
- Birth Year

Added - Former Occupations
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 PostPosted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:33 am Reply with quote  
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  Darth Thrax
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Joined: 10 Mar 2007
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Location: In front of a computer obviously.

I noticed in Jarik Sol's bio that he had a clone brother by the name of Devrin. That name sounds familiar. Smile
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

Added a few characters to the list.

Sarona Vel - I had created Sarona for a user on another site, but the user never became active after I helped them out.
Dradin Laxan Kilron - Created for GLF, but I decided he can be useful here.
Valence Geria Tonson Dooku - Created for GLF, but I decided he can be useful here.
Jeridan Kerath Shepard Durin Giles - Created for GLF, but I decided he can be useful here.

Feel free to use the characters in RP's if you see them as helpful. Just let me know.

EDIT: Thrax- Yes, I was probably influenced by that name. I actually came up with those names when I was writing a story for school, and I just put down the first 4 names I thought of, lol.
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Last edited by Supreme Commander Alor on Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:48 am; edited 1 time in total


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 PostPosted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:41 am Reply with quote  
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  Marius Praxeum
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Joined: 30 Jul 2009
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Location: Kuat, where his future lies.

Wow!  Shocked

Someone put a lot of effort into creating characters. May I ask what "GLF" is?


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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

GLF stands for GalacticLegacyForums. A forum I run off of my own domain name.

http://galacticlegacy.dark-flame.net is our homepage. The forum can be found at: http://galacticlegacy.dark-flame.net/forum/index.php.
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  Marius Praxeum
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Location: Kuat, where his future lies.

Thank you. If I get the free time, I'll check it out some more. Nice flash page though.


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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

Thanks.
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

Added Personal, no Official, residences for Marix.
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  Venedictos Appo
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You mention Darth Eclipse as becoming the "Pariah" of House Dooku. I think you may be looking for "Patriarch".

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/pariah
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/patriarch
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 PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:34 am Reply with quote  
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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I believe you are right. I thought it sounded weird when I was writing it. Thank you.
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No problem.
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  Lord Aequitas
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Location: Prancing through the fields like a prancing...prancer.

In the interest of canon, I need to know how Markaro Vos knows all those languages fluently?
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A. It doesn't saw fluently. B. That is coming in the next segment of the biography.
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  Lord Aequitas
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Location: Prancing through the fields like a prancing...prancer.

Ah well,

A. Languages spoken means Languages Spoken fluenty. Perhaps you should edit this? Or else put in brackets Mastered, Proficient etc

B. I can't wait to read it and find out how you can speak a variety of exotic languages.
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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A. That just says "Languages" not "Languages Spoken". But yes, I was planning on such a system, like with my lightsaber forms, just haven't had the time to determine which gets what rating.

B. In due time. The next installment is roughly 40% done.
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  Lord Aequitas
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Location: Prancing through the fields like a prancing...prancer.

Perhaps you should state more clearly in the future.
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

I was under the assumption that my profile was in the format that I wished it to be, as there is no rigorous guide to follow, and that if Users had questions, as you did, that they would direct them to this thread where the questions would be answered.
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

Added Lucius Vos, my alter ego.

Not completely done, but still workable.
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  Supreme Commander Alor
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Location: Designing a new superweapon...

Updated Markaro's biography. Added Early Life chapter.

http://thedarksithlords.myfreeforum.org/about4323.html#bio_earlylife

(To keep it as a newer profile, which it is. I deleted and reposted my last character to bump the thread up. So no new character, just updates on Marix.)



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