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Sith Code, Making it our own
 PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 1:37 pm Reply with quote  
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  Darth Acheron
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We have been discussing in the Gathering that the Sith Code seems cheesy, and was coined from the Jedi code. Here, we want YOU to create a new code, and, when we have enough enteries, we will put it to a vote, where you can vote for one code, which is not yours.
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 PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 2:19 pm Reply with quote  
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  Darth Duff
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Location: Filtering through the reminants of the Catacombs.....

here i go.

Embrace you anger,
Let it flow to hate,
Let passion drive you
Give in to the darkness,
Grip the blade,
Let the Power flow through you,
Darkness engulfs you,

You are Free

i know its not briliant but i tried....


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 PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 2:19 pm Reply with quote  
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  Darth Duff
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Embrace your anger,
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Correction Sorry Embarassed


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 PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 6:22 pm Reply with quote  
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  Lord Scourge
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Oh, I've made several previous stabs at it... give me a little while to try to make another one - usually I get my meaning right, my rhythm just breaks down half-way through. It's going to take me a little while just to search back through old messages on starwars.com forums to see what I came up with last time....

Also, if there are several favorites, it may be possible to edit the best bits of each into a final product, as well, depending on whether they can flow together like that.

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 PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 5:45 am Reply with quote  
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  Lord Seti
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Sith Litany

(based on the form of the Samurai creed)

I hade no origin; I made the Darkness my origin.
I hade no home; I made Death my home.

I hade no power; I made Fear my Power.
I hade no means; I made Strength my means.

I hade no magic power; I made the Force my Magic Power.
I hade neither life nor death; I made Anger my Life and Death.


I have no body; I make Terror my Body.
I have no eyes; I make the Inferiors my eyes.

I have no limbs; I make the Dark Side my Limbs.
I have no laws; I make Hatred & Passion my only Law.

- Seti I Shadim

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 PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 7:11 am Reply with quote  
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  Darth Duff
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Thats good Seti


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 PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 1:19 pm Reply with quote  
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Why does it say hade instead of have? And it should be present tense, maybe cut some of the parts, and that would be good.
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 PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 2:02 pm Reply with quote  
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  Lord Seti
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I have a rewrite using present tense & reducing some parts as per Lord Minious' suggestion. Any feedback would be appreciated.

Thanks,

Seti


Sith Litany ( Version 2)

(based on the form of the Samurai creed)

I have no origin; I make Darkness my origin.
I have no home; I make Death my home.
I have no power; I make Fear my Power.
I have no means; I make Strength my means.
I have neither life nor death; I make Anger my Life and Death.
I have no body; I make Terror my Body.
I have no laws; I make Hatred & Passion my Laws.

- Seti I Shadim

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 PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:11 pm Reply with quote  
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  Lord Scourge
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Okay, it took me a little while to find my previous attempts and come upon an inspired enough moment to create something that holds its rhythm throughout... here goes:

Through the Force — I achieve my Will.
To feel the Force — is to know my Will.
Through the Force — I have the Power of a star.
The brighter the Light — the Darker its shadow.
When the Light is extinguished — only Darkness remains.
Through the Dark Side — I achieve my Will.

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 PostPosted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 6:55 am Reply with quote  
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  Darth Duff
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Oh im torn betewen Setis and Scourges.

I dont know, my head hurts Mad


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 PostPosted: Fri Mar 10, 2006 12:04 pm Reply with quote  
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  Jaden Nightsaber
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I've been working on one(it's not great):

Peace, I hate the word as I hate the Jedi, their Temple, and the light.
Power, I embrace it and control it to be my pawn.
Hatred, I use it to kill and turn others.
The Force, I manupulate it so that I can achive power.
Darkness, I am an embodyment of it and overtake the light.
I am Sith. Twisted Evil
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The glory of Darkness within is a flame.
A wick of passion fuels my loss and fury.
Hated endows me with a powerful name...
I live life in Darkness, my judge and jury.
Beyond the Light, I shall forever thrive,
without power: may the Force let me die.
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I'm still building on this code. Suggestions are welcome.

Black White: To further the Black I must remove the blight of white
Day Night: For I know that Night is right I slay the Day
Dark Light: To further my sight I must refuse the Light


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  High Commander Vexen
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It isn't great but here it is

I bring death
Death to my enemies
I bring death through the force
The force is darkness
I am the darkness Twisted Evil
I am complete


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Its alright, but centers to much on death. The Jedi Code has completely different things in each verse. I have one, though also not very good:

To be a Sith, you conquer the shadows.
You slay the light, and embrace the dark.
You destroy your enemies, and watch your allies.
You bathe in darkness, the light sickens you.
To be a Sith, is to be complete.
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no it's pretty good
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What is?
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I like it, but at the same time the "To be a Sith" on every line annoys me.
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Why? Its stating everything a Sith does. Its like the Jedi Code, it states the rules of the Order, albeit, the Jedi don't say to be a jedi on every line, but I thought it would be cool, especially as a lead up to the last line.
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One of the basic rules of poetry is that repeating the first line of a stanza is okay, but repeating on every line causes the reader to lose interest pretty fast because the expect the same thing. Maybe if you have "To be a Sith" on the first and last lines and enhance everything in the middle it would be less gimicky to me (even though you shouldn't cater to me because it is your work).
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There is no peace;there is hate
Anger will achieve your goals
Power is what you hunger for
The Dark must drive out the light
Pain will give you power and
Break you of your chains
There is no Death for me
Only for my enemies
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I would have thought the Code is not poetry, but a series of lines on which the rules, and symbols of the Order are lain down.

Personally, though, I suck at poetry. Very Happy
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Minious' can still work, with a little tweaking I'd think. Simply change to beginings of a few lines. For example:

To be a Sith, you conquer the shadows.
To reach your goals, you slay the light.
To fulfil your destiny, you destroy your enemies.
To purify yourself, you bathe in darkness.
To be a Sith, is to be complete

Of course, those were what I put in without much consideration. I'm sure any rewrite you may do would have alot more thought put into the alterations, if you feel the need to make them.
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Really? I consider everything poetry. I suppose you are right.
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How about this then?

Quote:

To be a Sith, you conquer the shadows.
You slay the light, and embrace the dark.
You destroy your enemies, and watch your allies.
You bathe in darkness, the light sickens you.
To be a Sith, is to be complete.


Though yours works very well as well.



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