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  Supreme Prophet Praxeum
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This is unlike anything you will ever read. This story not only allows you inside the mind of a Dark Lord of the Sith and into the realm of Star Wars, but lets you take part yourself. It follows the story of a young man, Stap Praxeum, in his quest for truth. But your not going to be reading some simple story written as most fan-fictions are. No, you will get to see inside of his personal holocron! But you are going to have to piece all the pieces of the puzzle together and figure it out yourself! In the year 199 ABY, a Sith Research Team discovers the strange Sith Holocron, realizing it is unlike any other. So read along and enter the mind of the Dark Lord!

PROLOGUE

Date: 2.14.200 ABY
Subject: Darth Praxeum's Holocron
Recipient: Altair Verais
Sender: Reaor Tera'ivr

Altair,

Another update. The research team has discovered another technological advancement that Praxeum had made to his holocron. Besides the power restoration cell that keeps it from dying of power as most holocrons do, this one also was tampered with to the extent that it is unlike any other. Rather than a video recording system as all other holocrons have, Darth Praxeum had his holocron act as a database. Rather than film him discussing the path to the Dark Side, it seems like he used it for documents about his life, maybe hoping to let us know more about him - or him to hide things in his life. Though many records are kept of this well-known Sith Lord, very little is known of his history. This will really grow our archive.

- Reaor
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I would like to begin the discussion about what the first chapter means. Reading my biography will help.
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I am presuming you're transferring anything in your Holocron to here??  Very Happy
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Yes. It is more of a story, in my opinon. So, I made it a fan-fiction.
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Good idea. I liked your Holocron.
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So - what do you think the first chapter is about?
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Incorrect.

As I said, reading my biography will help.
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I did, a while ago.  Perhaps I need a refresher.
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The new chapters of it should be up soon.
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I've read it!
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I have an idea what the first chapter is about, but I'm not sure.
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Care to share your guess, Lady Ducki?

Unless she gets it, I will post what it means then post the next chapter tonight - though I will go into more details then what anyone would notice.
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I'm thinking that this is some sort of short conversation between Lexicon and some other guy right before Stap decided to activate the "safety net" on his comlink. It's just a guess.
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Bravo! You got it!

The detailed breakdown of it;

The document was placed within the Holocron in 50 ABY, but the document was created many years before that. It is a message sent to the Grand Inquisitor from his own underling who was tasked to learn more of Emperor Shadow for reasons that will be shown later. Then Praxeum was able to steal the document because of his own watching of the Grand Inquisitor for his own reasons. The coversation itself takes place in 34 ABY. Anything with [] around it is the document that was not repaired, thus the "REPAIR SYSTEMS AT 75 PERCENT" stated - and anything with {} around it is coded, thus the "LEVEL 6 ENCRYPTION DETECTED" stated in it.
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Yay! I have no idea about the next chapter however.
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I just posted the next section. Though the part of my biography being worked on right now would help you all a lot  Wink
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It's looking very interesting, more so than most of the other stuff in here. Looking forward to the rest of it!
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Ah, I was confused.

Any thoughts on the next chapter?
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Dissin' the Emperor's pet project. Smile

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