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"Aim towards the target. Let your anger take over your power. Connect yourself to the Force, feel it surging through your body." Marix goaded Laurio on.

As he watched Laurion struggle with the new powers running through his body, Markaro remembered his own training under Brigadier General Matas, and his own learning of Sith Lightning.

"Unleash it!" He yelled suddenly. Laurion jumped and complied. A single bolt of electricity jumped from his palm to the target's vicinity. Laurio opened his eyes and looked at Marix, who was reading from the meter.

"Not bad for your first time. Now try it again."
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Laurio couldn't beleive this was happening he was shooting lightning !
he felt amazed and tired at the same moment. He looked at the droids channeling his anger to his palm. he felt a surge and unleashed the force lightning at his enemies the guards he hated. he visualised the assasin droids as the guards and hit them with all the hate and anger in his chest that has been welling up in the years. as the lightning hit the droids he fell to one knee and recovered "i must have used too much energy than i should have" he thought to himself.
"is this up to your expectations master?" Laurio said.


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"You must learn to control your power. Restrain your anger to serve your needs, do not let your hate command you, but rather command your hatred to do your bidding. Now aim at me, but do not let a bolt touch me. Have your lightning go around my body and merge behind me."

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"Yes master i will try" Laurio said
Laurio aimed at his master. He felt the same as before exept this time he controlled it focusing on getting the lightning to go around his master and not touch him. when he was shooting the lightning as soon as it was about to hit his master it split into two strands and went around his master merging behind him into a ball of lightning and then dissapearing into a blue mist
"I did it master i did it! i didn't think i could do that!"


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"Very good. The only way to further strengthen and perfect that power is practice. But that will be on your own, and at another time. Now for another power, the Telekinetic Powers.

"Close your eyes and reach out in the Force to the pebble at your feet. Learn about the pebble, know its shape, size, weight, color, and hardness with only the Force as your guide." Markaro said.
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Laurio did as his master said and closed his eyes. He used the force to sense the ground. He felt a small pebble about 300 ish grams in weight easily liftable. It was shapped oddly though almost like a small boomerang. he pressed harder with the force using that to lift the pebble off the ground but it wasn't wotking very well. he let ho and Tried again Much harder this time lifting it up to about his face and dropping it once more "shall i suspend it in the air or drop it once more?" laurio asked his eyes still closed


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"Lift it to your hands. Keeping your eyes closed, I want you to check if you were right about the pebble's shape. When you are done, try to lift the large boulder 100 yards out and throw it further away."

Marix walked into his ship for a moment to check up with the Military and see if anything urgent required his attention.
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Laurio lifted the pebble withought effort and put out his hand.  not used to moving something he cant see he missed his hand the first time but got it right the second time. "Hmm i wasn't exactly right master its more rounder than i thought". he dropped the pebble and searched for the boulder his eyes still closed. This proved more difficult as a nearby tree was attracting his attention more than the boulder. He focused hard and found the boulder. This was a very large boulder indeed  almost over 10 pounds. "This will be difficult"he said. Using all the energy he could he lifted the boulder off the ground but dropped it again. "wha this is hard!". He tried again only to fail a second time. He thought hard. If he used all his energy picking it up how would he be able to throw it? .  So he slowly used his energy lifting it off the ground slowly and then faster until it was 2 feet off the groung and using as musch energy as he could muster Pushed it off into the distance. Panting heavily he fell to one knee "done ...... master .....what next?"he said slowly


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OOC: Remember your grammar, Laurio. You are forgetting to capitalize I's , use apostrophes, and create new paragraphs for dialogue. This is what your post should have looked like:
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Laurio lifted the pebble without effort and put out his hand. Not used to moving something he couldn’t see, Laurio missed his hand the first time but got it right the second time.
"Hmm I wasn't exactly right Master, it’s rounder than I thought." He said.
Laurio dropped the pebble and searched for the boulder, with his eyes still closed. This proved to be more difficult as a nearby tree attracted his attention more so than the boulder. He focused harder and eventually found the boulder. This was a very large boulder indeed almost 1000 pounds.
"This will be difficult," He said.
Using all the energy he could he lifted the boulder off the ground but dropped it again.
"Wow this is hard!"
He tried again only to fail a second time. He focused hard.
‘If I use all of my energy picking it up how will I be able to throw it?’ He wondered.
So he slowly used his energy lifting it off the ground slowly and then faster until it was 2 feet off the ground and using as much energy as he could muster, pushed it off into the distance.
Panting heavily he fell to one knee, "Done ...... Master .....What next?" He said slowly


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Markaro reappeared from his ship, holding in front of him a data-pad. On his face was a look of concentration.

"Good job, Laurio. But we have to leave. I have matters that need to be attended to. Come onboard."

Marix quickly had the IG-88's carry the meter back onboard and store themselves in the appropriate areas. Laurio boarded and took the co-pilot’s seat. Marix lifted them off and headed towards Cerea, where a conflict had broken out. Brigadier General Kilorn and Admiral Odeb were in command, but Supreme Commander Marix wanted to be there to observe them.

He came out of hyperspace hours later, and headed for the flagship. Landing in the hold, he directed Laurio to go to an empty cargo hold with the IG-88's and the meter and practice his lightning.
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"yes master"Laurio said and he directed the IG-88's and the meter to the nearest empty cargo hold just in case he was needed, as he reached the cargo hold he ordered the droids to line up and tried to hit 2 at once then 3 eventually he could weild force lightning very well


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Marix returned to the chamber, and saw Laurio resting. He took out his data-pad and entered a few commands. The IG-88's immediately turned to face Laurion, recognizing him as a threat. They had entered their modified mod, in which they used Force Lightning to power themselves, and not allow it to hurt them. Laurio would have to use his saber and wits to save himself.
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Laurio saw the Droids targeting him and used force levitate to smash two of them together then he took out his two Lightsabers Snap hiss charged forward and sliced at the closest droid.




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Marix sent a message through the Force.

"Remember to practice what you just learned."
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Laurio Heard what his master said and when he was close to the last droid he fell into a sweeping kick. The droid was not prepared and fell. As the droid was falling Laurio swung around and stabbed the droid right through the core. It fell to the ground with a large metallic Crash
Laurio sat down and rested waiting for his master. He thought about what he had learned in this session.


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Markaro stood and paced around his apprentice. Laurio appeared deep in thought. Marix respected that. He waited until Laurio was done, and then spoke.

"Do you feel confident in your abilities?"

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Laurio finished thinking and was gratefull to his master for letting him finish.
"Im confident enough, i still need to grasp the fact that the force is so powerfull, I never imagined such power." Laurio stood and looked at the destroyed droids.
"Erm sorry about your droids master" he grinned slightly after saying this.


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"They were meant to train you, not to survive. Besides, your next task will be to fix them. Even as a Sith, you will be faced with challenges that will require you to not use the Force to aid you. And you will need to be able to work with droids and such. While the ship is in hyperspace, please repair the droids."

Markaro walked over to a crate and sat down to watch his apprentice, as well as communicate with High Commander Vexen about a few matters of importance to the Navy and Army.
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"Ah well ive never fixed a droid before. But ill give it a shot." Laurio said.
Using the force laurio picked up the remains of one of the droids he used to throw at the others. It was in bad shape. The metal was bent and dented, the wiring was all over the place. Laurio sighed to himself and closed his eyes. He visualized the droid as it was before he threw it. He had to re-shape the droids metallic exo-skeleton. when that was done he looked at the droid and made a few more changes before he was satisfied.

Then he took the wiring and all the internal part's. This was the hardest part but most of it fitted well. After he had fixed the other two droids he looked at the one he had cut with his lightsaber.
"Sir im going to have to get a new core and body for this one its pretty damaged " Laurio said as he inspected the droid.


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"Then scavenge the other droids to make one working droid."
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Laurio looked at the other droids. One of them was damaged indeed so he took the plating from the chest and back off. He took out the core and looked at it . After a little while he had fixed the fourth droid and there were three working droids.
"Is there anything else i need to do master ?" laurio looked at Marix patiently.


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"You need to choose one that you feel is the best out of them now." Markaro replied. "Then you must accept that one as a gift from me, as we near the end of your training."

Markaro stretched out his hand and used the Force to turn the droids on. Immediately one exploded, its head turning into a smoking neck, while another started to randomly fire its blaster. Marix shut that one down.

"Looks like they narrowed your choices for you."
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Laurio looked at the one droid still standing
"Thank you master your gift is very appreciated. I will look at this droid later and find out why the other two ended up like . . . . . . that." Laurio Bowed in gratitude.


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"That is fine." Markaro replied. "Now tell me, do you feel that your training is complete?"

One of the greatest measurements of an apprentice's learning was his own feelings on the matter and how he came about those feelings. Too hasty an answer and he was not ready. Too long of thought, and he was not ready. But there was a point in between the two extremes that meant he was ready.
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Laurio thought a little.
" I do not think i am ready. You have yet to test my skills outside of a training regime. everything we have done up untill now has been controlled by something. I think my skills should be tested by something ....... A mission perhaps but that is for you to decide as the master. " Laurio said. He sat in a nearby chair awaiting his masters response


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Klaxons blared,  coming to life as the massive ship left hyperspace.

"Seems like your mission is here." Markaro said." Go to the hangar bay, and meet up with the 501st's Torrent Company in the hangar. Captain Rex will give you your orders. You will hear from me only if things go bad."

Markaro then turned and headed to the bridge, to assume command.



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