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OOC: Remember your grammar, Laurio. You are forgetting to capitalize I's , use apostrophes, and create new paragraphs for dialogue. This is what your post should have looked like:
| Quote: | Laurio lifted the pebble without effort and put out his hand. Not used to moving something he couldn’t see, Laurio missed his hand the first time but got it right the second time.
"Hmm I wasn't exactly right Master, it’s rounder than I thought." He said.
Laurio dropped the pebble and searched for the boulder, with his eyes still closed. This proved to be more difficult as a nearby tree attracted his attention more so than the boulder. He focused harder and eventually found the boulder. This was a very large boulder indeed almost 1000 pounds.
"This will be difficult," He said.
Using all the energy he could he lifted the boulder off the ground but dropped it again.
"Wow this is hard!"
He tried again only to fail a second time. He focused hard.
‘If I use all of my energy picking it up how will I be able to throw it?’ He wondered.
So he slowly used his energy lifting it off the ground slowly and then faster until it was 2 feet off the ground and using as much energy as he could muster, pushed it off into the distance.
Panting heavily he fell to one knee, "Done ...... Master .....What next?" He said slowly
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Markaro reappeared from his ship, holding in front of him a data-pad. On his face was a look of concentration.
"Good job, Laurio. But we have to leave. I have matters that need to be attended to. Come onboard."
Marix quickly had the IG-88's carry the meter back onboard and store themselves in the appropriate areas. Laurio boarded and took the co-pilot’s seat. Marix lifted them off and headed towards Cerea, where a conflict had broken out. Brigadier General Kilorn and Admiral Odeb were in command, but Supreme Commander Marix wanted to be there to observe them.
He came out of hyperspace hours later, and headed for the flagship. Landing in the hold, he directed Laurio to go to an empty cargo hold with the IG-88's and the meter and practice his lightning. _________________
Once known as Darth Marix
| Emperor Shadow wrote: | | The Military has always been a good counter-weight to my agendas.. |
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