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I know! That's why it was so difficult! I was going for the Darth Bane arrogance type. He was poisoned and didn't care, I assumed that Shadow would probably be poisoned a lot and simply resist it.
I don't really know about Shadow, you see. What I could deduce from the posts I could find, your bio and your holocron wasn't enough to build up enough of a death scene. So I made it short and quick. Praxeum's death, and Praxeum is a character I know a lot about, lasts for a whole page.
Since I put Shadow as being annoyed he couldn't finish what he wanted to, willing himself to die would be a bit over the top  _________________

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