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Supreme Commander Alor

Grammar could be a little bit better, but its ok.

Approved.
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Durza · Last edited by Durza on Tue Sep 22, 2009 9:05 pm; edited 1 time in total

I plee to you my masters, to give your approval.

Name: Durza

Gender: Male

Homeworld: Coruscant

Species: Human

Age: 24

Race: White

Height: 6' 6"

Weight: 111.5 lbs.

Hair: Black

Eyes: Maroon

Ship: M22-T Krayt Gunship

Weapons: KYD-21 Blaster Pistol, VibroKatana

Clothing: Durasteel armor, Usually covered by Black Robes

Personality: Insane

Brief Bio (More of a story though):

Durza was born into a middle class family. A family he hated.
He lived a average life, left home for his own endeavors, until one day, something in his head went off. He was struck with an idea. He would kill his family. He decided the perfect time for the act was at a family gathering. And at this reunion, he rigged all the server droids to target each family mamber as hostile, exept himself of course at 2:35 pm. He went to the refresher, rinsed his face and hands in the sink, at 2:35, and when he left the room.. The Blood was everywere. He left, and went home, but on the taxi ride home, he remembered something... one of the droids he rigged had a camera, to record the event, in his head. It was too late to go back, he already saw law enforcement going in that direction. He ordered the driver to drop him off at a spaceport.
When he arrived, it was bustling... so alive... he could use the crowd to his advatage, he thought. He hitched the first ride to Corellia. There, he robbed and killed many middle class citizens and stole a unique set of Durasteel armor, and bought a M22-T Krayt Gunship. He had to move again. He dicided he would go to another planet, and rob there too. He entered his ship... with sudden surprise, he saw 3 correlian officers, and well armed too. Two of the officers, began to try to hold him down, and succeeded, but in all the hatred, and through some unnatural force, he pushed them away, but starngely, without using his hands. They were knocked out, so he took thier blasters, and other affects, and dragged them out of the ship. As he did this he pondered what happened, and then, left for the Sith Academy.

Supreme Commander Alor

Looks good. Except for the Gunship part. a Krayt Gunship costs around 350,000 credits. You'd have to rob a lot of people to get that amount. Perhaps an insurance claim on something or an unknown benefactor gave you the funds to purchase the ship?
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Zion · Dark Adept Joined: 21 Sep 2009 Posts: 4

Name: Zion Qel-Droma
Age: 19 years
Homeworld: Bastion
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Weapons: Baragwin Heavy Repeating Blaster/ Shyyarn Blade
Ship: Sienar Fleet Systems Transport Model

I am willing to give up everything in my past to learn the ways of The Sith. I wish to command and manipulate the Dark Side to carve my destiny into greatness and glory and take control of the galaxy as ancestors of the true Sith did millenia ago.

Darth Thrax

Everthing seems fine, but we need a short backstory of yours. Such as, what made you want to join the Sith?
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Zion · Dark Adept Joined: 21 Sep 2009 Posts: 4

I was born on the remote world of Bastion. i am a direct descendant of the great sith/jedi Ulich Qel-Droma. I lived with my father and mother until i was 18. my mother was murdered, by my father. he tried to murder me as well, he failed. he was an old drunk who made life hell for me and my mother. he wasted all of my mothers hard earned money on drinks and pazaak. that old bastard deserved to die. i hated him. i ran away from my home after his death, i was picked up by slavers at the spaceport there. they sent me to Nar Shadaa. i was purchased by a hutt and was sent to slave work on Nal Hutta. while there, i murdered my master for beating me like my father had done. i then escaped into the swampy land. i was starving and was on the brink of death when a man, a sith, found me and preserved my life until we got to his ship. there, he told me i had the power of the dark side within me. he took us in the direction of this world. he was killed while we stopped on Dantooine for fuel. he gave me his ship and told me to come here. i wish to join because i believe i can use the power inside of me, the power i used to escape beatings and pain and hurt and suffering, to train at the feet of the great masters of the Sith Empire and use this new found power to expand the glory of the sith and its followers. but most of all, gain glory and power.

Darth Thrax

Zion · Dark Adept Joined: 21 Sep 2009 Posts: 4

yes. i realized i left that detail out. there was a jedi who had come to dantooine. he had tracked the sith master while he was on nal hutta. when we stopped on dantooine, the jedi master made his move. the jedi made a lethal blow to the Sith lord and continued to kill me but the sith man sacrificed himself to ensure my safety to this place.

forgive my ignorance master. i assure you it will lever happen again.

Supreme Commander Alor

A Sith Lord sacrificing himself for you? Not exactly our style.
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Zion · Dark Adept Joined: 21 Sep 2009 Posts: 4

i realize this. but i also realize he believed i had prime importance in the future of the sith.

Supreme Commander Alor

And why did he believe that an untrained boy would serve the Empire more than a full fledged Sith Lord would?
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Durza · Last edited by Durza on Tue Sep 22, 2009 9:08 pm; edited 1 time in total

I plee to you my masters, to give your approval.

Name: Durza

Gender: Male

Homeworld: Coruscant

Species: Human

Age: 24

Race: White

Height: 6' 6"

Weight: 111.5 lbs.

Hair: Black

Eyes: Maroon

Ship: M3-A Scyk fighter

Weapons: KYD-21 Blaster Pistol, VibroKatana

Clothing: Durasteel armor, Usually covered by Black Robes

Personality: Insane

Brief Bio (More of a story though):

Durza was born into a middle class family. A family he hated.
He lived a average life, left home for his own endeavors, until one day, something in his head went off. He was struck with an idea. He would kill his family. He decided the perfect time for the act was at a family gathering. And at this reunion, he rigged all the server droids to target each family mamber as hostile, exept himself of course at 2:35 pm. He went to the refresher, rinsed his face and hands in the sink, at 2:35, and when he left the room.. The Blood was everywere. He left, and went home, but on the taxi ride home, he remembered something... one of the droids he rigged had a camera, to record the event, in his head. It was too late to go back, he already saw law enforcement going in that direction. He ordered the driver to drop him off at a spaceport.
When he arrived, it was bustling... so alive... he could use the crowd to his advatage, he thought. He hitched the first ride to Corellia. There, he robbed and killed many middle class citizens and stole a unique set of Durasteel Armor, and bought a used and worn M3-A Scyk fighter. He had to move again. He dicided he would go to another planet, and rob there too. He entered his ship... with sudden surprise, he saw 3 correlian officers, and well armed too. Two of the officers, began to try to hold him down, and succeeded, but in all the hatred, and through some unnatural force, he pushed them away, but starngely, without using his hands. They were knocked out, so he took thier blasters, and other affects, and dragged them out of the ship. As he did this he pondered what happened, and then, left for the Sith Academy.

Is this better Master? Will I be accepted?

Supreme Commander Alor

I am a Sith Lord, not a Master.

And yes, that profile is accepted.
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Durza

I apologize my lord. What do I do now sir Twisted Evil

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Supreme Commander Alor

This is an official thread. Please keep your behavior and posts formal.

You may returned to your other thread (the one where I told you to come here) and begin looking for a Master. Please rename it with your username, no "Seeking a Master". To do that, just edit the first post and change the subject.
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Jastin · Sith Apprentice Joined: 02 Oct 2009 Posts: 271

Name:Jastin Kets
Age:18
Homeworld:Correlia
Species:human
Gender:male
Weapon(s):lightsaber(silver blade with standart Imperial Knight hilt)
Ship:x-83 TwinTail Starfighter
Bio:The son of a gray Jedi, Jastin Kets chose to join the imperial knights but was expelled for disagreeing with them and refusing to be a puppet of the force he kept his lightsaber wich had his father's durindfire crystal in it and his armor.He later returned to his Homeworld of Corellia where he met a man named Durza who said he was going to the sith academy on kuat.Jastin realized that the sith academy was the best place for him so a week later he went there.

Supreme Commander Alor

Is there any particular reason as to why you have the same IP Address as the user account: "Durza"?
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Once known as Darth Marix

Lord Aequitas

Marix, we allow "secondary accounts" now.
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Jastin · Sith Apprentice Joined: 02 Oct 2009 Posts: 271

((Actually sirs it isn't a secondary acc the person who made that acc is my brother))

Supreme Commander Alor

Jastin · Sith Apprentice Joined: 02 Oct 2009 Posts: 271

With all due respect sir the question is a bit confusingly put.The thing I'm trying to say simply is that my brother made the acc known as durza and I made the acc known as Jastin.

Supreme Commander Alor

That clears up the issue.

Back to the profile: The Imperial Knights do not exist in our timeline. There isn't so much a Sith Academy as it is an Empire.
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Jastin · Sith Apprentice Joined: 02 Oct 2009 Posts: 271

Correct sir and I apologize for that I had thought the time was a bit further in the future.I will change it so that it is correct if you want me to.

Lord Aequitas

Yes, change it please.
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Supreme Commander Alor

We are further into the Timeline. But because our Empire existed, the New Republic and Imperial Remnant (and then the Empire once again) did not exist. So any bodies from those governments, unless specifically accepted/referenced on this site, never existed.

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